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to lose at love
to lose at love
is not the end
it is the beginning
of a new life
a new freedom
i am free
to go after someone
i can trust to love me
like i want to be loved
to lose at love
is not the end
is not the end
it is the beginning
of a new life
a new freedom
i am free
to go after someone
i can trust to love me
like i want to be loved
to lose at love
is not the end
Published 7th Mar 2013
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Anonymous
7th Mar 2013 2:48am
You are so right! It is good to start fresh and over at times. Well written! :)
8th Mar 2013 10:21pm
Anonymous
7th Mar 2013 3:04am
I love your words, Faith... "to lose at love / is not the end." How true, & this: "like I want to be loved." I enjoyed this finely-penned piece! Lovely! :)
Carlene
Carlene
8th Mar 2013 10:24pm
You always say the sweetest things, Carlene. Thank you once again for your lovely comments. :)
Faith
Faith
7th Mar 2013 7:21am
8th Mar 2013 10:25pm
7th Mar 2013 8:07pm
Once again, Faith, your words a beautifully, if not tearfully, put down. However, even though a new beginning, it often feels like an end. It can be hard putting one foot in front of the other after it happens, trust me.
8th Mar 2013 5:01am
Thank you for your wonderful remarks, dear. You are so right about it feeling like an end and it is hard starting anew.
