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fairies wear boots
Toe-tap the roots
into Sycamore
as I anoint her belly,
a conduit of bottom-most palpitation.
Put away the pen my dear,
creation needs no life support
and
anthropologists poison mirrors.
We are the edge,
everywhere an ammonite
skin no longer separates
vision,
is not divided.
Do not deny
when the cursor
again becomes a point
Let not the secularism
of rationale
destroy the positivity
that defies proof.
(Proof, is for the pussy
too self aware to post this)
into Sycamore
as I anoint her belly,
a conduit of bottom-most palpitation.
Put away the pen my dear,
creation needs no life support
and
anthropologists poison mirrors.
We are the edge,
everywhere an ammonite
skin no longer separates
vision,
is not divided.
Do not deny
when the cursor
again becomes a point
Let not the secularism
of rationale
destroy the positivity
that defies proof.
(Proof, is for the pussy
too self aware to post this)
Published 6th Mar 2013
| Edited 7th Mar 2013
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Anonymous
6th Mar 2013 10:24pm
love the poem love the song too lightbaron
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7th Mar 2013 1:06am
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7th Mar 2013 1:48am
"anthropologists poison mirrors"
thas a fantastic line lb. many thoughts there bro...
thas a fantastic line lb. many thoughts there bro...
7th Mar 2013 2:27am
dig it, thanks man...I dislike the idea of anthropologists, a lot...seems to me they go poke and prod and consequently fuck up things they shouldn't have for I don't if its for academics or entertainment, but ehhh whatever my rant..glad the line gotcha thinking
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- Edited 7th Mar 2013 9:05am
7th Mar 2013 9:04am
"Toe- tap the roots" is beautiful. It's a very pagan image. Well, it is to me anyway. I think it ties in nature and love in a very neat little parcel. I've got some rather bizarre Wicker Man style worship going on in my head. I like that it's provoked that kind of image.
"Skin no longer separates
vision
is not divided"
I can't help but feel there needs to be some punctuation after 'vision' just to break up this sentence. I found myself stumbling on that when I read it.
Quite a beautiful read all round.
"Skin no longer separates
vision
is not divided"
I can't help but feel there needs to be some punctuation after 'vision' just to break up this sentence. I found myself stumbling on that when I read it.
Quite a beautiful read all round.
7th Mar 2013 9:53am
super dig it..pagan wicker man invocation I can live with pretty darn happily..yeah, think your right about the vision, punctuation thing upon a relooksee...preciate the read and thoughts missy
10th Mar 2013 3:43pm
Title drew me in and brought back to mind my 8" platform boots worn with attitude in the punk rock days.
Much of my youth was toe tapping roots and slowing enough to BE part of nature.
"skin no longer separates vision" brings a smile. Thanks for sharing
Much of my youth was toe tapping roots and slowing enough to BE part of nature.
"skin no longer separates vision" brings a smile. Thanks for sharing
10th Mar 2013 7:55pm
love to ad a smile!
thanks for reading and commenting Ken.
the original title was "the pixies ate acid, and dreamt of us" it was an even flakier write that was a bit too much romance...don't mind the over the top cutesy or romantic if it does get bogged down in mushy...I scrapped a lot of it and I guess wanted to give it just wee bit more tough ness...so I borrowed the title from Black Sababth..cheers bro, god to see ya
thanks for reading and commenting Ken.
the original title was "the pixies ate acid, and dreamt of us" it was an even flakier write that was a bit too much romance...don't mind the over the top cutesy or romantic if it does get bogged down in mushy...I scrapped a lot of it and I guess wanted to give it just wee bit more tough ness...so I borrowed the title from Black Sababth..cheers bro, god to see ya
13th Mar 2013 6:49pm
Hello Mr. LB (grins)
Had some family business to take care of, so I have been absent a bit and wanted to do some catching up today.
Darlin, of your latest four, this one holds weight, as well as sway with me.
Your lines are interesting, and yet simply put with just a touch of romantic thrown in for good measure. Although a Sabbath appreciator lol I would go for another title ;) something in a similar vein perhaps. If I didn't have a monster headache at the moment, I could probably be a wee bit more helpful. But I still didn't want to pass by without a word.
Lovely read Hun :)
Had some family business to take care of, so I have been absent a bit and wanted to do some catching up today.
Darlin, of your latest four, this one holds weight, as well as sway with me.
Your lines are interesting, and yet simply put with just a touch of romantic thrown in for good measure. Although a Sabbath appreciator lol I would go for another title ;) something in a similar vein perhaps. If I didn't have a monster headache at the moment, I could probably be a wee bit more helpful. But I still didn't want to pass by without a word.
Lovely read Hun :)
14th Mar 2013 3:29pm
thank you Maggie for leaving the few words.
at a weird spot at the moment...wouldn't say that I am spinning my wheels, because I have been working, just lost a bit of the clarity in my concepts I think....i'll push through, and always appreciate your thoughts, thanks again.
ps. haha, yeah, don't love the title, meant to change it, guess I got complacent and left it
at a weird spot at the moment...wouldn't say that I am spinning my wheels, because I have been working, just lost a bit of the clarity in my concepts I think....i'll push through, and always appreciate your thoughts, thanks again.
ps. haha, yeah, don't love the title, meant to change it, guess I got complacent and left it
1st Apr 2013 6:33am
"anthropologists poison mirrors"
I'm with johnrot on that one, definitely a line that stayed with me a long while later. Cheeky number this, enjoyed greatly.
I'm with johnrot on that one, definitely a line that stayed with me a long while later. Cheeky number this, enjoyed greatly.
1st Apr 2013 7:40am
dig it Kaatho, as a writer that I enjoy and respect a good deal, its particularly nice to get a nod of approval from your camps direction.
yes, anthropology has plenty of groovy aspects and I am admittedly overly harsh to it...but I do have fairly negative connotations as well that can help illustrate some things in certain writes...at least I hope so,,,
thank you very much for reading and commenting
yes, anthropology has plenty of groovy aspects and I am admittedly overly harsh to it...but I do have fairly negative connotations as well that can help illustrate some things in certain writes...at least I hope so,,,
thank you very much for reading and commenting
