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Haiku VII
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Haiku VII
Forceful water veils
Embracing cloaked cliffs and rocks
Footloose in their fall
Written by
Chiyo
(Miss Chi)
Published
6th Mar 2013
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Re: Haiku VII
Anonymous
6th Mar 2013 7:29pm
Wonderful waterfall of words!
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Chiyo
(Miss Chi)
6th Mar 2013 8:07pm
Thank you so much, Mourganna! I'm glad you like it!
I.
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Re: Haiku VII
Anonymous
7th Mar 2013 4:37am
Exquisite haiku, Iris! The last line, in particular, sounds so nice to my ear! Well done! :)
Carlene
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Chiyo
(Miss Chi)
8th Mar 2013 10:17am
I always appreciate your lovely comments, Carlene! Thank you for reading!
I.
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Re: Haiku VII
jagracia
17th Jul 2013 10:39pm
I love the alliteration of the "f" in forceful, cliffs, footloose, and fall. Wonder(f)ul.
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Chiyo
(Miss Chi)
17th Jul 2013 11:44pm
Thank you so much for your wonder(f)ul comment .-)!
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