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Goin'downAboard Thee USS 'Fchrisakes'
th'stench was bearable,if
not evenabit perversely
plea'sant, of like bur
ning[a]battleship hot'steel
hot'oil burburning th sizzle
like of cold old ocean slappin
th hot'hot metal,scurrying bfore
thee munitions startXploding,scur
rying further into thee deepend of
a quickfast nowhere/anywhere
all captains were summarily killed
to lessen thee confusion but
wee were merely left as hopeless as prior
to exercising our rights [in execut
e'ive
manor),
so wee had to,were compelled to,hold
our wailing faces wit our bloody paws,&
thus,little work was actually done
toward our imagined prefab[ricatable]redemption -
'They'[as they are],say there are no atheists
in redhot sinkin hellholds like this like
this-here, yet eye swear i heard several
choruses of some'tune like:
"MotherfuckJesus,GodfuckingDamn",
tho it could as well've been justan'other
call-to-worship/'belief'testimonation/or
more'o that save-me-ass
hyper'prayer
that every 'I' among us knows
rather well
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not evenabit perversely
plea'sant, of like bur
ning[a]battleship hot'steel
hot'oil burburning th sizzle
like of cold old ocean slappin
th hot'hot metal,scurrying bfore
thee munitions startXploding,scur
rying further into thee deepend of
a quickfast nowhere/anywhere
all captains were summarily killed
to lessen thee confusion but
wee were merely left as hopeless as prior
to exercising our rights [in execut
e'ive
manor),
so wee had to,were compelled to,hold
our wailing faces wit our bloody paws,&
thus,little work was actually done
toward our imagined prefab[ricatable]redemption -
'They'[as they are],say there are no atheists
in redhot sinkin hellholds like this like
this-here, yet eye swear i heard several
choruses of some'tune like:
"MotherfuckJesus,GodfuckingDamn",
tho it could as well've been justan'other
call-to-worship/'belief'testimonation/or
more'o that save-me-ass
hyper'prayer
that every 'I' among us knows
rather well
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Published 4th Mar 2013
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4th Mar 2013 5:12pm
Another poetic ponderer from your talented pen. Though your nib may be a bit bent- the words it writes are true. Everyone one of we poor bastards afloat on this ship of fools called life knows the chorus to that song- it matters not whether your first-class or steerage- and translates into all languages. I think it was Oscar Wilde who once said "My mind has chosen not to believe in God- my soul however insists in its orthodoxy- needless to say this has proved rather a complication in my life."
4th Mar 2013 5:33pm
great commentary....great O.W.
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g'odd
b'less
us
every
one...
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g'odd
b'less
us
every
one...
