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Before Burroughs
Letters, the beginning of a word
share in reason, sentences heard
The Ancient Days of Urizen given
Los Sentient Being, Blake's vision
steeped and seep ways, upon thinking
Long were his questions, slept upon
Forlorn views, negatives muse, sigh lined.
Before colors again adorned sprit and mind
Grimm or glitter of fairy dust
hues that dance the odd or macabre
these joys and public displays
carry me through this very day
With light that shines positive
dawns break, entering as living dead, yet
With light that shines positive
carry me through this very day
these joys and public displays
hues that dance the odd or macabre
Grimm or glitter of fairy dust
Before colors again adorned sprit and mind
Forlorn views, negatives muse, sigh lined.
Long were his questions, slept upon
steeped and seep ways, upon thinking
Los Sentient Being, Blake's vision
The Ancient Days of Urizen given
share in reason, sentences heard
Letters, the beginning of a word
share in reason, sentences heard
The Ancient Days of Urizen given
Los Sentient Being, Blake's vision
steeped and seep ways, upon thinking
Long were his questions, slept upon
Forlorn views, negatives muse, sigh lined.
Before colors again adorned sprit and mind
Grimm or glitter of fairy dust
hues that dance the odd or macabre
these joys and public displays
carry me through this very day
With light that shines positive
dawns break, entering as living dead, yet
With light that shines positive
carry me through this very day
these joys and public displays
hues that dance the odd or macabre
Grimm or glitter of fairy dust
Before colors again adorned sprit and mind
Forlorn views, negatives muse, sigh lined.
Long were his questions, slept upon
steeped and seep ways, upon thinking
Los Sentient Being, Blake's vision
The Ancient Days of Urizen given
share in reason, sentences heard
Letters, the beginning of a word
Published 3rd Mar 2013
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3rd Mar 2013 8:56am
3rd Mar 2013 9:10am
Thank You ever so much Dear Magdalena
Your too kind...
I'm not too swift writing like this...
Your too kind...
I'm not too swift writing like this...
3rd Mar 2013 2:36pm
3rd Mar 2013 11:57pm
Anonymous
3rd Mar 2013 5:38pm
Your ability as a poet is phenomenal.
You are very humble; however your writing
shows a great knowledge of culture, wordsmithing
and writing.
Excellent
Write on............
Kitty
You are very humble; however your writing
shows a great knowledge of culture, wordsmithing
and writing.
Excellent
Write on............
Kitty
4th Mar 2013 00:01am
4th Mar 2013 1:24am
Cool pic that goes well with the poem...nice use of repetitions too.
I agree with Kitty's comments as well.
I agree with Kitty's comments as well.
4th Mar 2013 1:35am
7th Mar 2013 4:31am
fantastic closer sd..." letters the beginning of a word"
well done man
quick question tho. how did you intend "Los" in the 4th from last line? like length of stay or spanish trans? jus curious bro.
well written piece man....
well done man
quick question tho. how did you intend "Los" in the 4th from last line? like length of stay or spanish trans? jus curious bro.
well written piece man....
7th Mar 2013 5:55am
Thanx JR glad You liked!!!
humbled.
Los was a fallen GOD/human type (one of 4) in the tales of Urizen...He is a represent of the beating Heart...sometimes they tell or depict him with a hammer (the pic is the comic book art done on the twist of him, pulling the string)
(also...the name is an anagram for Sol...which is short for Souladareatease...that's all the secrets Your getting LOL thanx For asking man...wouldn't make much sense as the Spanish meaning eh?:)
humbled.
Los was a fallen GOD/human type (one of 4) in the tales of Urizen...He is a represent of the beating Heart...sometimes they tell or depict him with a hammer (the pic is the comic book art done on the twist of him, pulling the string)
(also...the name is an anagram for Sol...which is short for Souladareatease...that's all the secrets Your getting LOL thanx For asking man...wouldn't make much sense as the Spanish meaning eh?:)
7th Mar 2013 6:38am
thanx for the info man. a subject i must research more. makes much more sense now. apologies for my ignorance.
7th Mar 2013 6:44am
NO WORRIES, definitely NO SORRIES... hope I didn't offend, my stuff sounds weird when I talk plain, cause I know what it means as I'm writing it...a lot of times I collide 3 stories at a time!!!
I appreciate the questions:)
I appreciate the questions:)
7th Mar 2013 6:57am
no offense taken man. i love something new to learn about. urizen similar to milton's satan. los energy soon to succumb to mechanical features and the creator of of life and sexes. the fire of imaginative energy......etc
awesome man. fn gr8!!!!!
awesome man. fn gr8!!!!!
1st Apr 2013 7:02am
OH YES! Im fond of this too!
I see why you adore it!:)
Masterfully executed!
Shall I copy and paste the entire poem so you can see my favorite lines?! lol.. :)
I see why you adore it!:)
Masterfully executed!
Shall I copy and paste the entire poem so you can see my favorite lines?! lol.. :)
1st Apr 2013 11:34pm
:) This was a fun write...I had never tried those kind and was intimidated...I was spurred on to write it by Engrvv for a comp he was doing...I did two for his comp...I kept promising...then waited till a day or two before it ended...down to the wire...sometimes tis better in such a way:)
