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Frontal Lobe Finger Tapping
There are these
thoughts
in the back
of my head
I can't hear
what they're
saying,
its all quite a bit
maddening
mumbling thoughts
the kind that
haunt
and tease
ideas
that need
a release
a way out
to manifest
blocked,
deafened
almost
supernaturally repressed
mental objects
refusing to format
a thickening
of a simple
process
locked doors
in my own psyche
I know I have the keys
I can hear them jingling.
thoughts
in the back
of my head
I can't hear
what they're
saying,
its all quite a bit
maddening
mumbling thoughts
the kind that
haunt
and tease
ideas
that need
a release
a way out
to manifest
blocked,
deafened
almost
supernaturally repressed
mental objects
refusing to format
a thickening
of a simple
process
locked doors
in my own psyche
I know I have the keys
I can hear them jingling.
Published 1st Mar 2013
| Edited 4th Mar 2013
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1st Mar 2013 4:00pm
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1st Mar 2013 4:07pm
Very nice indeed ...
You just described my frustration with writing perfectly. lol
You just described my frustration with writing perfectly. lol
1st Mar 2013 4:11pm
:) thanks Maggie, there is something I want to explain except my mind just wont go there and its bugging me...its as if the words I need do not exist on this plane lol
1st Mar 2013 4:24pm
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2nd Mar 2013 10:16pm
1st Mar 2013 4:32pm
I have this most days, my mental pen goes on
strike, wonderfully put across. Much enjoyed! :)
strike, wonderfully put across. Much enjoyed! :)
1st Mar 2013 4:36pm
1st Mar 2013 4:55pm
"I know I have the keys
I can hear them jingling."
Perfect ending! liked it alot.
I can hear them jingling."
Perfect ending! liked it alot.
1st Mar 2013 5:03pm
Anonymous
1st Mar 2013 5:15pm
Love the lock & keys in this. Perfect fit. Favorite was the last though.. the cherry on top. Nailed it!
[mental objects
refusing to format
a thickening
of a simple
process
locked doors
in my own psyche
I know I have the keys
I can hear them jingling.]
[mental objects
refusing to format
a thickening
of a simple
process
locked doors
in my own psyche
I know I have the keys
I can hear them jingling.]
1st Mar 2013 5:17pm
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2nd Mar 2013 5:26pm
2nd Mar 2013 3:57am
Awwwww.... a stab within from the labrynth!
Spin and flow Nikki moe, because sometimes a locked door?
Means going in through the window on the second floor!
I'm not sure why but it pleases me to know that someone who is normally soooo gifted as you to produce work that seems to just emerge, rather than being composed.... it pleases me to know that some of those chambers where the beasts only speak in tongues... are waiting for you as well. Somehow that makes creativity feel less solitary. This piece was universally accessible to many parts of me!
Spin and flow Nikki moe, because sometimes a locked door?
Means going in through the window on the second floor!
I'm not sure why but it pleases me to know that someone who is normally soooo gifted as you to produce work that seems to just emerge, rather than being composed.... it pleases me to know that some of those chambers where the beasts only speak in tongues... are waiting for you as well. Somehow that makes creativity feel less solitary. This piece was universally accessible to many parts of me!
2nd Mar 2013 5:27pm
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Anonymous
4th Mar 2013 2:07am
A brilliant last stanza, nikkimoe, to a very well-inked piece! Enjoyed the read! :)
Carlene
Carlene
4th Mar 2013 10:50pm
4th Mar 2013 5:11pm
'has been awhile since last I read your amazing symphonies of thought chosen words.I woke disturbed and very down, my fingers led me back to this site.
Ive digested your words and once again have found them comforting in the sense of knowing and learning in the humbleness needing, need met I now go as I came, in peace and curiosity.
Sabbath
Ive digested your words and once again have found them comforting in the sense of knowing and learning in the humbleness needing, need met I now go as I came, in peace and curiosity.
Sabbath
4th Mar 2013 10:49pm
Awesome!!! :) glad something I wrote helped!!
its good to hear something like that from time to time thanks Sabbath!
its good to hear something like that from time to time thanks Sabbath!
