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thank you
I thank you
For falling in love with me
I thank you
For being my hero
I thank you
For ripping it all away from me
I thank you
For betraying me
I thank you
For leaving me
I thank you
Because i found myself again
I thank you
For being the asshole
I never knew i needed
Thank you, for breaking my heart.
For falling in love with me
I thank you
For being my hero
I thank you
For ripping it all away from me
I thank you
For betraying me
I thank you
For leaving me
I thank you
Because i found myself again
I thank you
For being the asshole
I never knew i needed
Thank you, for breaking my heart.
Published 1st Mar 2013
| Edited 17th Mar 2013
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3rd Mar 2013 7:57am
Quite a different spin on a break-up, but very relateable. To me at least. I don't like to critique works because I always feel that an authors original work is the best a poem can get. I will say though that adding more material couldn't hurt
3rd Mar 2013 8:46am
Probably. I just feel there should be more simplicity to it. Just simply
Thank you, for once being therr then betraying my trust. Leaving me a broken and empty shell alone. Thank you for showing me that i didnt need you as much as i thought. Just a simple thank you.
Thank you, for once being therr then betraying my trust. Leaving me a broken and empty shell alone. Thank you for showing me that i didnt need you as much as i thought. Just a simple thank you.
3rd Mar 2013 12:30pm
Thankfulness of a broken heart or pains from the heartbreaking ? The other side of the coin is visible through another side of coin.Sweet short expressions of a broken heart.
