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Momma will draw them a ...
~Miss Sub I love you and honored for the video.
ohhh
hush
lil baby
don't you cry
mommas gonna sell you
again tonight
and if that
pretty dress
don't fit
mommy will draw them
a landing strip
a place in space
your mind will go
so
the tears can
dig them a comfort zone
and when your cries
fall on deaf ears
3b will see you
in a few years
medication
amphetamine floats
turning demons
into ghosts
but when that high
starts to fade
the men who raped you
reveal their face
stained glass cleansing
dope hope toast
too mommy who taught me
yes means no
so
hush
lil baby
don't you cry
just buy another sack
so you can get high.
ohhh
hush
lil baby
don't you cry
mommas gonna sell you
again tonight
and if that
pretty dress
don't fit
mommy will draw them
a landing strip
a place in space
your mind will go
so
the tears can
dig them a comfort zone
and when your cries
fall on deaf ears
3b will see you
in a few years
medication
amphetamine floats
turning demons
into ghosts
but when that high
starts to fade
the men who raped you
reveal their face
stained glass cleansing
dope hope toast
too mommy who taught me
yes means no
so
hush
lil baby
don't you cry
just buy another sack
so you can get high.
Published 28th Feb 2013
| Edited 1st Mar 2013
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28th Feb 2013 8:59pm
Now this was really deep and a very sad piece. Yet it was very well written. Nice work
28th Feb 2013 11:44pm
Reality is way darker than we imagine.....I see you as a reporter on the front lines of the Anti-Matter Cosmic Experience.
1st Mar 2013 1:44am
Hmmm we seem to have written something very similar today. Great minds think alike I guess.. Much love dev
1st Mar 2013 4:00am
Hey Dev, as usual, a very dark and disturbing write as only you can do.
Love ya
Love ya
1st Mar 2013 5:43pm
Anonymous
1st Mar 2013 5:59pm
Highly disturbing write that captured my imagination. Sent chills down my spine.
2nd Mar 2013 00:49am
2nd Mar 2013 1:25am
A brilliant piece showing the depth behind the indulgent depravity, complimented by a voice encapsulating regret and flase security.
A dark piece to make a beacon of what good dark poetry is.
A dark piece to make a beacon of what good dark poetry is.
3rd Mar 2013 8:00pm
6th Mar 2013 1:44am
I like that it went with a lullaby....makes alot more sense that way. rythem matters.
that is something us poets must keep in mind
that is something us poets must keep in mind
6th Mar 2013 5:24pm
My sinful sister only you can bring a depraved subject to light. Your creativity has grown so much and it's evident by your followers.
Hugs and kisses
Hugs and kisses
10th Mar 2013 8:30pm
Oh lovely Lady of Darkeness I feel the pain in each verse..yet it coats and comforts me somehow knowing i'm not alone..sweet kisses amomg daggers..if that makes sense..I love you and will follow you always..love Crim
Anonymous
17th Mar 2013 7:59pm
I cannot speak,
Fearing my voice will crack
I cannot type the right words
My hands are shaking to be still
DAMN IT!!!
XOXO
Fearing my voice will crack
I cannot type the right words
My hands are shaking to be still
DAMN IT!!!
XOXO
22nd Mar 2013 6:41am
29th Mar 2013 11:50pm
it made me cry fro i can feel this and it's almost like you went through this hopefuly no though
9th Apr 2013 5:46am
1st May 2013 3:35pm
9th Mar 2014 3:00am
Damn You! My Mother you to sing that lullaby to me as a baby. And now you went and ruined it forever.
"Now where's my sack, I need to get high!"
"Now where's my sack, I need to get high!"
31st Dec 2014 4:43am
This is one of those real writes
that reaches into your guts and
rips out all delusions of hope.
A Bleak picture but you've painted
it honestly.
Hope you don't mind me commenting
since this is my first...
Pan (LyricofAngst)
that reaches into your guts and
rips out all delusions of hope.
A Bleak picture but you've painted
it honestly.
Hope you don't mind me commenting
since this is my first...
Pan (LyricofAngst)
