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Melting Point
*have you found yours?*
I need to melt away
immerse myself in dream
shed my camouflage of day to day
for I'm much more than what I seem
Wholesome on the outside
I'm wanton to my core
lady when I need to be
beneath that surface, there is more
Close your eyes, and we are there
echoes of loves sweet sighs
your passion finds nirvana
between these alabaster thighs
In a hot and honey velvet
a sweet molten abyss
love cresting on the waves
and lust sealed within a kiss
Tongues and lips exploring
hungry ever more
Shall we invite true passion in,
leave inhibitions at the door?
Fantasies enacted
oh, nothing is taboo
let pleasure be the guiding light
for what feels right for you
Trust me with your fantasies
fill me with your need,
brand me with your touch
imagination is the seed
Costumes, toys and lenses
all shall have their places
wanton lust consumes us now
as sinful pleasure paints our faces
I want to writhe under your tongue
then taste my juice upon your lips
as you dive into that pleasure spot
with my legs wrapped round your hips
Whisper naughty somethings
into willing, eager ear
I'll purr in yours, all those words
a man could want to hear
Upon my knees I gaze up
a look of mischief on my face
tomorrow I'll be your lady
but tonight I know my place
I need to melt away
immerse myself in dream
shed my camouflage of day to day
for I'm much more than what I seem
Wholesome on the outside
I'm wanton to my core
lady when I need to be
beneath that surface, there is more
Close your eyes, and we are there
echoes of loves sweet sighs
your passion finds nirvana
between these alabaster thighs
In a hot and honey velvet
a sweet molten abyss
love cresting on the waves
and lust sealed within a kiss
Tongues and lips exploring
hungry ever more
Shall we invite true passion in,
leave inhibitions at the door?
Fantasies enacted
oh, nothing is taboo
let pleasure be the guiding light
for what feels right for you
Trust me with your fantasies
fill me with your need,
brand me with your touch
imagination is the seed
Costumes, toys and lenses
all shall have their places
wanton lust consumes us now
as sinful pleasure paints our faces
I want to writhe under your tongue
then taste my juice upon your lips
as you dive into that pleasure spot
with my legs wrapped round your hips
Whisper naughty somethings
into willing, eager ear
I'll purr in yours, all those words
a man could want to hear
Upon my knees I gaze up
a look of mischief on my face
tomorrow I'll be your lady
but tonight I know my place
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24th Feb 2013 00:30am
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Anonymous
24th Feb 2013 1:09am
Nicely done Lola
Strider...
Strider...
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24th Feb 2013 2:08am
thanks for dropping by Strider. We can't all sky-dive, so this is my own version of a free-fall.
Lola
Lola
Re: Melting Point
24th Feb 2013 4:52am
Suggests the delicacy and sensuality rather then naughty or wicked instincts. The basic senses come to mind with most of these line.
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24th Feb 2013 9:42pm
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Anonymous
24th Feb 2013 6:32am
This is Hot! :)
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24th Feb 2013 9:44pm
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24th Feb 2013 8:33pm
As aptly befits its title, hot. An invitation to the man to see and enjoy the woman beneath the lady. The sex kitten comes out to play hard!
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24th Feb 2013 9:41pm
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24th Feb 2013 10:29pm
Everybody is talking about snow and cold so melting points seem like so long ago...
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25th Feb 2013 00:22am
Ah, well I'm just back from a trip to Mexico, so perhaps that explains why I'm not affected by the ice and snow.
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25th Feb 2013 1:00am
and Santana and Willie Nelson can tell you all about going to Mexico. I still remember being shocked when I heard them together.
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25th Feb 2013 1:03am
I don't believe I've heard it. it just seems so wrong on SO many levels. Scampering off to youtube it now.
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"They All Went To Mexico" was on the album, Havana Moon which is one of my favorite Santana collectons. My parents were going on a cruise so right before they left the house I put on the song. They were laughing all the way to the marina.
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Re: Melting Point
12th Mar 2013 9:13am
This is true eroticism embracing the mind and spirit this is love making at it best,unadorned.
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Re: Melting Point
24th Mar 2013 11:13am
A fine piece of writing erotic and amazingly 'innocent' reminds me of someone Thankyou Lola I like this very much
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Re: Melting Point
28th May 2014 11:40pm
The pictures in my mind race and make my heart flutter. An erotic write indeed. Enjoyed.
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