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All Ashore Longoing Ashore
but for this cozylittle room on
thee firstcoast of paradise,where
would be thee remnants of I ? wh'ere
would lay me fatty bones [?]for th'nights
recurrences repeating a lite'ning dark wit
[font=Courier New]too
many years passed in passing making
The Past, th'pastense, a passin'fancy,
just more rememory
th'oughts skewed (as ever they must) by
my unseen/unknown agendas(while all thee while,"I"
pre'fer a plurality
should-be-known-as
'agendi')
thee shore
line
to thee east,
a thinning run bare
footed
in aloneness save (for)
brother's small quick'lean
dawgie, thru miles(or2) of shells shells
shells,mostly beated & broken by/in this nature
they are & pushed up'on the sands the shore
in millions billions uncounted
outer skeletal relics
of 'little' 'smaller'...some
humanly-grand hu'man would call
'lesser'
Lives -----
seems like seeming no thing 'left' unto
'my'Ghost-of-me, than a daily
immersion, wave-slapped bap'tizm, slap'slap
an envigorant
calling to consciousness that
something/someonesomehow may indeed still
be here[/font]
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thee firstcoast of paradise,where
would be thee remnants of I ? wh'ere
would lay me fatty bones [?]for th'nights
recurrences repeating a lite'ning dark wit
[font=Courier New]too
many years passed in passing making
The Past, th'pastense, a passin'fancy,
just more rememory
th'oughts skewed (as ever they must) by
my unseen/unknown agendas(while all thee while,"I"
pre'fer a plurality
should-be-known-as
'agendi')
thee shore
line
to thee east,
a thinning run bare
footed
in aloneness save (for)
brother's small quick'lean
dawgie, thru miles(or2) of shells shells
shells,mostly beated & broken by/in this nature
they are & pushed up'on the sands the shore
in millions billions uncounted
outer skeletal relics
of 'little' 'smaller'...some
humanly-grand hu'man would call
'lesser'
Lives -----
seems like seeming no thing 'left' unto
'my'Ghost-of-me, than a daily
immersion, wave-slapped bap'tizm, slap'slap
an envigorant
calling to consciousness that
something/someonesomehow may indeed still
be here[/font]
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Published 23rd Feb 2013
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Anonymous
23rd Feb 2013 3:50pm
This was great!
23rd Feb 2013 3:54pm
23rd Feb 2013 6:26pm
A thought provoking delight as always- and the last stanza- exquisite. And you don't even need the pictures- for your verse is always a delight to the eye in form as it is to the mind in content.
23rd Feb 2013 6:35pm
as 'they' say: y're too kind, dear LeMuse, but one cannot too kind.....
i much appreciate yr newcomer's well'read, deep eXperienced
scannings---
will try to keep up on yr rites in kind
i much appreciate yr newcomer's well'read, deep eXperienced
scannings---
will try to keep up on yr rites in kind
23rd Feb 2013 6:49pm
:) well done as usual!
loving every freaking word man!!! every freaking word!!!!
loving every freaking word man!!! every freaking word!!!!
23rd Feb 2013 7:22pm
