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the mission
kick the stand up, flick the wrist
this baby’s warmed up and ready
to lift
I’ll ride the gun, you pack the ammo, they
won’t see the hammer blow, ‘til it’s
too late
gathered speed and surge of power
hold steady, I see the target dead
ahead
armed, locked, target acquired
75 mils, recoilless
fire!
dust and crumbled mortar brushed off,
empty bags in hand for the bounty
beyond
look at that… they’re home-made, too
I can’t stop droolin’… quickly now,
grab ‘em
back at camp, we chow, happy and lazy
fresh baked, oven hot, biscuits and
gravy
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21st Feb 2013 10:11pm
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That bakery never knew what hit it! I love the ending too ;) mmmm..biscuits and gravy..
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Anonymous
21st Feb 2013 10:38pm
sweet ataki
strider
strider

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21st Feb 2013 10:42pm
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21st Feb 2013 11:14pm
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Anonymous
22nd Feb 2013 00:09am
Imaginative, Atakti, & the last stanza finishes the piece perfectly! Enjoyed! :)
Carlene
Carlene

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22nd Feb 2013 2:38pm
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22nd Feb 2013 00:12am
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22nd Feb 2013 10:50am
HOLY SHIT ... this is great!!! And not just because I am an old soldier. So Tank Girl ...
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22nd Feb 2013 2:40pm
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22nd Feb 2013 11:39am
Toss a performance engine on this bad boy (or at least something with a little more kick than the normal B&S or Tecumseh faire) and you could have the low rider from Hell... smirks...
Bonnie & Clydeing the baked goods was a bit different, and I much enjoyed the read Atakti.
Uley
Bonnie & Clydeing the baked goods was a bit different, and I much enjoyed the read Atakti.
Uley
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22nd Feb 2013 2:41pm
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Anonymous
22nd Feb 2013 12:17pm
Cool and humorous write, indeed!
Much enjoyed this, A.
Keep at it, ok.
Cheers
Tidespotter
Much enjoyed this, A.
Keep at it, ok.
Cheers
Tidespotter

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re: Re: the mission
22nd Feb 2013 2:44pm
Hi there, Tidespotter, thanks for stopping by and leaving your words.
Cheers backatcha!
Cheers backatcha!
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Anonymous
23rd Feb 2013 10:49am
What a great story! This was so entertaining!
Creative Ink!
Creative Ink!

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23rd Feb 2013 3:52pm
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3rd Apr 2013 8:48pm
Not knowing what to expect from the on-set I was pleasantly surprised. Very interesting. Great job of transitioning. I love biscuits and gravy. Smiling. Peace always.
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3rd Apr 2013 10:18pm