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Haiku IV
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Haiku IV
Like koi in a pond
dark secrets show in your eyes
the surface‘s gone blind
Written by
Chiyo
(Miss Chi)
Published
21st Feb 2013
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Re: Haiku IV
Anonymous
21st Feb 2013 7:23pm
Iris, I like the comparison between koi & dark secrets. Lots of meaning in this lovely haiku. Much enjoyed! :)
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Chiyo
(Miss Chi)
31st Mar 2014 6:45pm
Uh, saw you comment just now. Thank you so much for your lovely comment!
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Re: Haiku IV
jagracia
17th Jul 2013 10:32pm
I like the double entendre where "surface" can refer to the pond and the eye. Beautiful.
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Chiyo
(Miss Chi)
17th Jul 2013 11:54pm
I'm glad to seemingly have been able to express my thoughts. Or I've found someone who can read Haikus expertly. Thank you, jagracia!
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Re: Haiku IV
7th_son
31st Mar 2014 2:45am
well played kiru.. i like the ones that your mind makes you skip when its so bold..
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Re: Haiku IV
Chiyo
(Miss Chi)
31st Mar 2014 6:43pm
Thank you, 7th_son, glad you like it :-).
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