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patience
beyond the flesh
a mind, deeper still
what is this that observes the brain?
the form is complete
closed eyes see
rebirth
a mind, deeper still
what is this that observes the brain?
the form is complete
closed eyes see
rebirth
Published 30th Aug 2010
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14th May 2012 2:34am
Abstract, and I'm not sure in the good way. I really expected more to it; as it is I believe it lacks substance. I am interested to see where this goes.
20th May 2012 3:18pm
