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anOtherOne for TwoThreeFour
[1st]
choose a category, dr
aw a straited line, pack
pactshit in to
neatconvenient
c o n tainers --- &save
(said shit) for a future of
further anal
ysis --
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
[2nd]
every dog has her/his a day
now-a-days like always
before, each day as
best day - hum
an
holiday, wholly holy, was hallow'd
out hollow'ed as per igno'rant
cliche, typic of mankind's
kind of man
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
[3rd]
refuge? for this/that/other?
refugeeeeeee?
aye
thought naught i'thought not....
on'ly many words'o'many, encrapped,
deep storage's sew'age[of]
manly man's encrapment
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
[f'orth]
makin th'dollas[of]sense,
herofriend mocks another friends
pootpoot [ w o r d s ],
pooting out his uselessness...a
superhero cartoon comicbook
consciousness w'illpower
t'save thee[o'fckn]
world
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
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choose a category, dr
aw a straited line, pack
pactshit in to
neatconvenient
c o n tainers --- &save
(said shit) for a future of
further anal
ysis --
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
[2nd]
every dog has her/his a day
now-a-days like always
before, each day as
best day - hum
an
holiday, wholly holy, was hallow'd
out hollow'ed as per igno'rant
cliche, typic of mankind's
kind of man
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
[3rd]
refuge? for this/that/other?
refugeeeeeee?
aye
thought naught i'thought not....
on'ly many words'o'many, encrapped,
deep storage's sew'age[of]
manly man's encrapment
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
[f'orth]
makin th'dollas[of]sense,
herofriend mocks another friends
pootpoot [ w o r d s ],
pooting out his uselessness...a
superhero cartoon comicbook
consciousness w'illpower
t'save thee[o'fckn]
world
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
XXXXXXdkzk15feb2013xxxxxphfoto:dkzkXXXXXXXXX
Published 15th Feb 2013
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Anonymous
15th Feb 2013 8:16pm
I think yours is the style to emulate :-)
You make up words tastefully and you know how to break crappy rules....as well as, let's not overlook, your cool taste in homophonic expression.
I see your clever inventions and twists of grammatical functions yet to be ....understood by many.
Bravo, Daniel, I applaud thee for thy courage and...that wicked sense of ....I can do this and I shall!
You create ambiguity so artfully with a simple letter space...wow.
Man, pen on, never quit thy style....for, in thy efforts, I sense pure freeeeeedom...... :-D
Unique to the tee....AND beyond!
Peace
Tidespotter
You make up words tastefully and you know how to break crappy rules....as well as, let's not overlook, your cool taste in homophonic expression.
I see your clever inventions and twists of grammatical functions yet to be ....understood by many.
Bravo, Daniel, I applaud thee for thy courage and...that wicked sense of ....I can do this and I shall!
You create ambiguity so artfully with a simple letter space...wow.
Man, pen on, never quit thy style....for, in thy efforts, I sense pure freeeeeedom...... :-D
Unique to the tee....AND beyond!
Peace
Tidespotter
16th Feb 2013 00:57am
wow, Tide
ye overwhelm me wit necessary nourishment...it's rare rarer rarest that someone 'gets it' enough to make any comment at all....you are of a most precious few....
i'd like t'get t'know ye better
ye overwhelm me wit necessary nourishment...it's rare rarer rarest that someone 'gets it' enough to make any comment at all....you are of a most precious few....
i'd like t'get t'know ye better
"&save
(said shit) for a future of
further anal
ysis -- "
and not a trick! actually mean's'ome
great picture BTW
P.S. i rare rarer rarely 'gets it' enough
but what 'i do' is suffericient to amusert
ta'me yee!
(said shit) for a future of
further anal
ysis -- "
and not a trick! actually mean's'ome
great picture BTW
P.S. i rare rarer rarely 'gets it' enough
but what 'i do' is suffericient to amusert
ta'me yee!
