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This world
Every breath I take
Brings me closer to my fate
To feel no more
Would bring joy to my world
To know that pain will always stain
And remind me of this cruel world
Constantly in pain
Enough to go insane
What hope do i have
With no joy to retain
I was made to fly
But shot down
Wings clipped from the sky
Falling
Spiraling out of control
With no help
Relief comes on impact
Brings me closer to my fate
To feel no more
Would bring joy to my world
To know that pain will always stain
And remind me of this cruel world
Constantly in pain
Enough to go insane
What hope do i have
With no joy to retain
I was made to fly
But shot down
Wings clipped from the sky
Falling
Spiraling out of control
With no help
Relief comes on impact
Published 15th Feb 2013
| Edited 18th Feb 2013
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15th Feb 2013 6:38am
I like the structure of this poem,
and the emotion it evokes.
'Wings clipped from the sky'
^Wonderful, wish that I'd written it.
Scribbler.
and the emotion it evokes.
'Wings clipped from the sky'
^Wonderful, wish that I'd written it.
Scribbler.
Anonymous
15th Feb 2013 6:55am
Love the tone in your poem....that constant struggle.
Thanks for sharing :-)
Pen on, poet!
Cheers
Tidespotter
Thanks for sharing :-)
Pen on, poet!
Cheers
Tidespotter
16th Feb 2013 00:32am
