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Pauly 2's and 8's
2's and 8's
he is obsessed
2's and 8's
he adds
2's and 8's
he subtracts
2's and 8's
he adds again
2's and 8's
in his mind
everything must
always fit,
mathematically
perfect,
multiplying
dividing
until
they become
just more
2's and 8's
the numbers
are his
only love
without them
he is wandering
in a head
filled with chaos
2's and 8's
birds in trees
2's and 8's
cars on the street
2's and 8's
everyfuckingwhere
2 shoes
8 fingers
2 thumbs
2 cats
8 spoons
2 quarters
5 cups, 5 fucking cups
break 5 down
2 and 3
fuck
2 and 3
fractions
decimals
add the 3
to the 5
8.8.8.8.8.8.8.8.
he pulls his hair
8 times
smacks himself 2
he walks 8 steps forward
2 steps back
counting
counting
counting
counting
counting
counting
counting
counting
fucking madness
it must add up
it must subtract down
it has to
it has to
moaning on
the inside
the numbers
eat his sanity.......
the numbers
the angel numbers
the key
to the door
2's and 8's
are the key
alchemy
make it gold
2's and 8's
evil is odd
good is even
2's and 8's
2's and 8's
doors need keys
2's and 8's
2's and 8's
2's and 8's
2's and 8's
2's and 8's
2's and 8's
2's and 8's
2's and 8's
he is obsessed
2's and 8's
he adds
2's and 8's
he subtracts
2's and 8's
he adds again
2's and 8's
in his mind
everything must
always fit,
mathematically
perfect,
multiplying
dividing
until
they become
just more
2's and 8's
the numbers
are his
only love
without them
he is wandering
in a head
filled with chaos
2's and 8's
birds in trees
2's and 8's
cars on the street
2's and 8's
everyfuckingwhere
2 shoes
8 fingers
2 thumbs
2 cats
8 spoons
2 quarters
5 cups, 5 fucking cups
break 5 down
2 and 3
fuck
2 and 3
fractions
decimals
add the 3
to the 5
8.8.8.8.8.8.8.8.
he pulls his hair
8 times
smacks himself 2
he walks 8 steps forward
2 steps back
counting
counting
counting
counting
counting
counting
counting
counting
fucking madness
it must add up
it must subtract down
it has to
it has to
moaning on
the inside
the numbers
eat his sanity.......
the numbers
the angel numbers
the key
to the door
2's and 8's
are the key
alchemy
make it gold
2's and 8's
evil is odd
good is even
2's and 8's
2's and 8's
doors need keys
2's and 8's
2's and 8's
2's and 8's
2's and 8's
2's and 8's
2's and 8's
2's and 8's
2's and 8's
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Re: Pauly 2's and 8's
Anonymous
13th Feb 2013 5:16pm
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Re: Pauly 2's and 8's
13th Feb 2013 5:26pm
Nikki talk about obsession? 2's and 8's binary and computer-think? I have a friend who buys sweets in packets and has to count them to see if he's got an odd or an even number. The daft bugger just has to know would you believe? Otherwise he's sane!
I enjoyed this quirky write poet, more power to you. :-)
I enjoyed this quirky write poet, more power to you. :-)
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re: Re: Pauly 2's and 8's
13th Feb 2013 6:51pm
yeah it is strange sort of but i do understand needing to know and adding and subtracting...I used to count each letter in words I would read hoping to achieve an even number at the end....
thanks for reading Blocat!
thanks for reading Blocat!
Re: Pauly 2's and 8's
13th Feb 2013 5:33pm
Yep...
In the patterns, security, organization, and sanity are found.
Been there, and watched that.
Understood :)
In the patterns, security, organization, and sanity are found.
Been there, and watched that.
Understood :)
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Re: Pauly 2's and 8's
Anonymous
13th Feb 2013 6:14pm
Curiosity wants to know if this flowed out as smoothly as it was received, or if you had to work at the details (5 cups, 2 and 3, 5+3, back to magic 8). But I told curiosity to shut the hell up and enjoy it for what it is! A fantastic show of what it must be like in "his" head. It's different, but I like it!
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re: Re: Pauly 2's and 8's
13th Feb 2013 6:54pm
I figure most people can tell....
I have never spent more than 1 hour writing 1 piece...if it takes to long...I get bored and kill it...
so yes this did flow easily lol :)
thanks scat!!!
I have never spent more than 1 hour writing 1 piece...if it takes to long...I get bored and kill it...
so yes this did flow easily lol :)
thanks scat!!!
Re: Pauly 2's and 8's
nice poem and my emo friend shania read it and relized what you were talking about and what you ment!!
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re: Re: Pauly 2's and 8's
13th Feb 2013 6:55pm
Re: Pauly 2's and 8's
Anonymous
13th Feb 2013 9:17pm
GREAT poem, Nikki, obsessions can take over and control things, I used to be a list freak but thats something else...
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re: Re: Pauly 2's and 8's
13th Feb 2013 9:24pm
Re: Pauly 2's and 8's
13th Feb 2013 10:15pm
I understand this poem,
I have some obsessions myself.
Wonderfully written :)
I have some obsessions myself.
Wonderfully written :)
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Re: Pauly 2's and 8's
13th Feb 2013 11:16pm
Re: Pauly 2's and 8's
14th Feb 2013 4:06am
Re: Pauly 2's and 8's
14th Feb 2013 2:31pm
powa'full dxcription
of
a terrible
disorder of mind---painful,
x'lent
of
a terrible
disorder of mind---painful,
x'lent
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Re: Pauly 2's and 8's
15th Feb 2013 8:38am
Re: Pauly 2's and 8's
17th Feb 2013 4:55am
Aaaaawww.... mental tracks have us captive! I can relate and LOVE this for 2's and 8's!
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