Content Warning : Do you want to continue?
This poem contains content which some readers may find disturbing.
It is unsuitable for children or anyone who is easily offended.
YES
I am over 18 years old, I have been warned and I still want to read this poem.
I am over 18 years old, I have been warned and I still want to read this poem.
NO
I don't want to read this type of content, take me back to the previous page.
I don't want to read this type of content, take me back to the previous page.
deepundergroundpoetry.com
"...Climbing..."
Sometimes when I'm climbing
Onto your dick
I like pausing
Right at the tip
With the head flicking
At my pussy lips
Love looking
In your eyes
As I slide
Down onto it...
Doesn't it
Feel so right
As I
Begin to wind
Taking my time
You grabbing
At my sides
Impatiently
Trying to guide
But I
Take back control
Immediately
Giving in
To the freak within
Moving
Not just side to side
And up and down
But around and around
I go
Switching
From fast to slow
And as I stroke
Steadily climbing
The fires
Of sexual desire
Stir hypnotically
Causing me
To dive
In a sea
Of ecstasy...
Then I wake up to find
You climbing
On top of me
Pausing
With the tip
Flicking
At my pussy lips
You looking
Into my eyes
As you slide
Into me...
----------------------------------------
written by LL on 1-17-13
Onto your dick
I like pausing
Right at the tip
With the head flicking
At my pussy lips
Love looking
In your eyes
As I slide
Down onto it...
Doesn't it
Feel so right
As I
Begin to wind
Taking my time
You grabbing
At my sides
Impatiently
Trying to guide
But I
Take back control
Immediately
Giving in
To the freak within
Moving
Not just side to side
And up and down
But around and around
I go
Switching
From fast to slow
And as I stroke
Steadily climbing
The fires
Of sexual desire
Stir hypnotically
Causing me
To dive
In a sea
Of ecstasy...
Then I wake up to find
You climbing
On top of me
Pausing
With the tip
Flicking
At my pussy lips
You looking
Into my eyes
As you slide
Into me...
----------------------------------------
written by LL on 1-17-13
Published 12th Feb 2013
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
likes 7
reading list entries 3
comments 9
reads 1550
Commenting Preference:
The author encourages honest critique.
12th Feb 2013 4:46pm
Excellent! An erotic turn-on that was the perfect way to start my day. (Although, I will need to stay seated at my desk for the next little while before I can appear before a class of students.)
I enjoyed reading this. It presents an image of "a sea of ecstasy" that we all dream about --even lust about.
Jay
I enjoyed reading this. It presents an image of "a sea of ecstasy" that we all dream about --even lust about.
Jay
12th Feb 2013 5:07pm
Oh you are too much Jay! ;) You making me blush..;) Seriously tho, I made it rise?... Gee, that really makes me feel good 2 know..;) And I'm thrilled 2 kno you enjoyed..:)
26th Feb 2013 3:07pm
I seem to always rise to your writing --sometimes in appreciation of the work itself and sometimes for other reasons.
Jay
Jay
Lady, in those times that I do pass through your creative space, i am impressed at the way you weave your colored words into the fabric creating a complete and pointed patchwork. Always keeps to the theme and illicits a particular sensuality. Mmmmm....the illiteration of those "I's":
"Sometimes when I'm climbing
Onto your dick
I like pausing
Right at the tip
With the head flicking
At my pussy lips
Love looking
In your eyes
As I slide
Down onto it... "
How those "i's" make me tingle as you:
Climb onto my dick or
pause right at the tip.....
My head flicks at your pussy lips
I really "feel" heaven when you slide down on to it. "I" concur that with brother J. as my meat stick seems to be properly wedged against the underside of my desk right now as well. Quite hard, pulse throbbing and head dripping.
Bravo LL. You are that first girl I ever slow danced with ; ) Wow.....
Great write!
"Sometimes when I'm climbing
Onto your dick
I like pausing
Right at the tip
With the head flicking
At my pussy lips
Love looking
In your eyes
As I slide
Down onto it... "
How those "i's" make me tingle as you:
Climb onto my dick or
pause right at the tip.....
My head flicks at your pussy lips
I really "feel" heaven when you slide down on to it. "I" concur that with brother J. as my meat stick seems to be properly wedged against the underside of my desk right now as well. Quite hard, pulse throbbing and head dripping.
Bravo LL. You are that first girl I ever slow danced with ; ) Wow.....
Great write!
12th Feb 2013 5:42pm
And just like Jay, you r too much as well! Blushing and smiling is all i can do..;) Thanx 4 stopping by and commenting, creatively so, i might add..;) Much appreciated;)
12th Feb 2013 6:33pm
I had this feeling that even riding roller coasters in my youth something was missing!
Even the way you placed the words here speaks of sensuality.
Delicious write.
Even the way you placed the words here speaks of sensuality.
Delicious write.
12th Feb 2013 9:25pm
:) :) :) Thank you for that, and as always your words are much appreciated;)
17th Jan 2014 11:58am
27th Oct 2014 4:08am
