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Glitter and Grime
Beneath the glitter.
Beneath the grime.
Beneath the undo sands of time.
Under trinkets.
Under gold.
Under caverns high and old.
Into the roil.
Into the beast.
Into the heart of the ancient feast.
Time ticks,
Time ticks,
As the waxing gods play their tricks.
Time ticks,
Time ticks,
Time ticks, ticks, ticks, ticks,
For this man and that women.
Time ticks, ticks, ticks, ticks,
And the glitter and the grime,
Go on and on.
Beneath the grime.
Beneath the undo sands of time.
Under trinkets.
Under gold.
Under caverns high and old.
Into the roil.
Into the beast.
Into the heart of the ancient feast.
Time ticks,
Time ticks,
As the waxing gods play their tricks.
Time ticks,
Time ticks,
Time ticks, ticks, ticks, ticks,
For this man and that women.
Time ticks, ticks, ticks, ticks,
And the glitter and the grime,
Go on and on.
Published 12th Feb 2013
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12th Feb 2013 5:44pm
I really like this one :)
The syllable count and rhyming make it flow well (though I remember you saying you don't like that because it makes it seem 'sing-songy').
Moar? :3
The syllable count and rhyming make it flow well (though I remember you saying you don't like that because it makes it seem 'sing-songy').
Moar? :3
12th Feb 2013 7:15pm
