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V day
Sentiments galore about love so grand
forgive me if I put my head in the sand
you see like moments at Christmas
or the Church of old
some act like it is a day
to wipe out the old mold
treating a partner, that special someone
with disdain or neglect
then hoping a day of nice nice
will make up for the past wrecks
so to wrap up the message
have good fun and erotic cheer
but don't take him/her for granted
the other 364 days of the year
forgive me if I put my head in the sand
you see like moments at Christmas
or the Church of old
some act like it is a day
to wipe out the old mold
treating a partner, that special someone
with disdain or neglect
then hoping a day of nice nice
will make up for the past wrecks
so to wrap up the message
have good fun and erotic cheer
but don't take him/her for granted
the other 364 days of the year
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Re: V day
12th Feb 2013 5:09am
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12th Feb 2013 6:16am
Thanks...last Valentine's Day I ended up calling the police for a friend who was being abused by a boyfriend so I am hoping this one has less drama.
Re: V day
12th Feb 2013 7:27am
That's why we treat Vday like another day of the year in my home. We're each other's valentine all through the years and we show it daily!
Love your ending, Jazz! Well said! :)
Love your ending, Jazz! Well said! :)
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re: Re: V day
12th Feb 2013 2:30pm
In defense of Valentines' Day, Ella Fitzgerald and Sarah Vaughan did do an awesome job with the song, "My Funny Valentine"!
On a less serious note I remember grade school, and each year having my mom insist I buy those cards for everyone in my class. The next day I went back to thinking the girls had cooties!
On a less serious note I remember grade school, and each year having my mom insist I buy those cards for everyone in my class. The next day I went back to thinking the girls had cooties!
re: re: Re: V day
12th Feb 2013 2:52pm
lmao @ cooties! haha.....
hey, I use to love Vday in elementary school. It was even more fun when I was buying those same cards for my son to take to school...hmmm....wonder if he ever thought the little girls had cooties too?! lol...I gotta ask him that. :)
hey, I use to love Vday in elementary school. It was even more fun when I was buying those same cards for my son to take to school...hmmm....wonder if he ever thought the little girls had cooties too?! lol...I gotta ask him that. :)
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re: Re: V day
12th Feb 2013 2:32pm
in some ways that makes me sad. Thank you; I am just hoping for decent weather. (Never was an issue when living in California)
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Re: V day
12th Feb 2013 1:46pm
You have a fine mind. I have never sent a Valentine card however I do like this poem
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re: Re: V day
12th Feb 2013 2:35pm
Thanks---this was partially a reaction to fact that the do nothing Congress of last year wouldn't reauthorize the Violence Against Women Act at the end of the last session.
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Anonymous
12th Feb 2013 1:55pm
Wonderful poem.
The recipe for a perfect valentines day is:
CHOCOLATE TRUFFLES
Surprised?
Thought I would say a day in bed...
IF SO....VIAGRA or CIALIS
And then lots of cuddling....
If either partner has not fallen asleep
...sex is very relaxing....
Dr. Ruth...remember her....
now Dr. Kitty.....
Your poem is just yummy....
The recipe for a perfect valentines day is:
CHOCOLATE TRUFFLES
Surprised?
Thought I would say a day in bed...
IF SO....VIAGRA or CIALIS
And then lots of cuddling....
If either partner has not fallen asleep
...sex is very relaxing....
Dr. Ruth...remember her....
now Dr. Kitty.....
Your poem is just yummy....
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re: Re: V day
12th Feb 2013 2:40pm
I have to agree with one exception; some people don't like things made out of dark chocolate. (my sister-in law and closest platonic female friend are two of them)
Not sure that everyone needs Viagra or Cialis. For some us a partner is a favorite outfit will do. I do remember Dr. Ruth---hard to forget that voice!
Thanks!
Not sure that everyone needs Viagra or Cialis. For some us a partner is a favorite outfit will do. I do remember Dr. Ruth---hard to forget that voice!
Thanks!
Re: V day
12th Feb 2013 7:16pm
I enjoyed that. You're so right. You should treat your partner as if every day were V day! Wonderfully written!
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re: Re: V day
12th Feb 2013 8:10pm
on the other hand at the very least I will have my watergun out if anyone plays "Gangnam Style" near me anytime soon.
Re: V day
12th Feb 2013 8:04pm
A very thoughtful sentiment on this very special day...and yes I agree with you, everyday should be special.
Happy V-day my friend...
Happy V-day my friend...
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re: Re: V day
12th Feb 2013 8:15pm
Thanks---due to a unexpected resource for a chocolate delight, a few people will be pleasantly surprised in my area.
Re: V day
24th Feb 2013 00:27am
don't get me started on the commercialism of the holidays! A holiday to celebrate love? When it comes to love and respect for our partners, it should be every day. Well said.
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re: Re: V day
24th Feb 2013 00:39am
Commercialism? Oh I don't know anything about that! (I say as I look at the boxes of girl scout cookies bought)