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While The Sky Weeps Snow - A Haiku Cycle
He is coming now
Pale as white jade by lamplight
While the sky weeps snow
While the sky weeps snow
Shedding his warm kimono
His sweet skin trembles
His sweet skin trembles
Under the touch of my hand
Seeking there for spring
Seeking there for spring
My lips search his for kisses
Finding only frost
Finding only frost
My heart now fills with winter
While the sky weeps snow
Pale as white jade by lamplight
While the sky weeps snow
While the sky weeps snow
Shedding his warm kimono
His sweet skin trembles
His sweet skin trembles
Under the touch of my hand
Seeking there for spring
Seeking there for spring
My lips search his for kisses
Finding only frost
Finding only frost
My heart now fills with winter
While the sky weeps snow
Published 11th Feb 2013
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Anonymous
11th Feb 2013 10:44pm
Absolutely beautiful piece! Exquisite words & images. Love the last stanza, in particular! Welcome to DUP, LeMuseNoir! :)
Carlene
Carlene
12th Feb 2013 2:31am
Carlene-
They say you never forget your first time- and for me that's you! Thanks for the kind words and the welcome
Le Muse Noir
They say you never forget your first time- and for me that's you! Thanks for the kind words and the welcome
Le Muse Noir
Anonymous
12th Feb 2013 3:07am
Le Muse Noir, I haven't been here all that long, myself. My thanks for your kind words, as well. It's a pleasure meeting you on this great site! Enjoy! :)
Cheers-Carlene
Cheers-Carlene
16th Feb 2013 11:22pm
17th Feb 2013 00:19am
19th Feb 2013 5:07am
I'm not a huge fan of Japanese poetry forms, but I can appreciate them, and the care and detail required to execute them well. This was very fluid, and well done.
