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Chink char
me and the Chinese bloke
who owns the coffee-shop
in the one-horse town I work near
get to talkin’
six o’clock before work
every morning
while I wait for his good stuff
he likes to talk about stretching
reckons westerners need to get looser
and I don’t say fuck all to that
probably because I’m too uptight
today
handing over the cup
he brushes his fingers against mine
smiles another kind of smile
and I laugh
take my coffee shaking my head
never occurred
to this big dumb white bloke
that it might not be the coffee
that makes him so keen
on the talkin'
who owns the coffee-shop
in the one-horse town I work near
get to talkin’
six o’clock before work
every morning
while I wait for his good stuff
he likes to talk about stretching
reckons westerners need to get looser
and I don’t say fuck all to that
probably because I’m too uptight
today
handing over the cup
he brushes his fingers against mine
smiles another kind of smile
and I laugh
take my coffee shaking my head
never occurred
to this big dumb white bloke
that it might not be the coffee
that makes him so keen
on the talkin'
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Re: chink char
11th Feb 2013 9:12pm
The hard hat will do it every time Hemi. :) Most enjoyable read, it made me smile.
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re: Re: chink char
11th Feb 2013 9:13pm
Re: chink char
11th Feb 2013 9:14pm
:D not just a Babe magnet, he's looking for to get at your noodle.
all seriousness aside though, nice good humor and taste, leaves the rest to the mind. I like that, rather than you going into him being like Frodo and all the ways he's wanting to destroy your ring.
maybe change good stuff to good food, pretty much on the button though all round.
good show boss.
all seriousness aside though, nice good humor and taste, leaves the rest to the mind. I like that, rather than you going into him being like Frodo and all the ways he's wanting to destroy your ring.
maybe change good stuff to good food, pretty much on the button though all round.
good show boss.
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re: Re: chink char
11th Feb 2013 9:15pm
Re: Chink char
11th Feb 2013 10:38pm
re: Re: Chink char
12th Feb 2013 1:57am
Re: Chink char
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- Edited 11th Feb 2013 10:45pm
11th Feb 2013 10:44pm
I can relate to this poem Hemi...for several hours one night long ago, I played some serious pool with a bearded ex-military guy...no joke, he wanted to play more than eight ball~it wasn't my game. Ha ha...
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re: Re: Chink char
12th Feb 2013 1:58am
Ah good on you mate....have a few stories like that myself...scandalous :-)
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Re: Chink char
11th Feb 2013 11:52pm
re: Re: Chink char
12th Feb 2013 1:58am
Re: Chink char
12th Feb 2013 8:35pm
Haha, nice one, m'dear! I understand the attraction but the man better watch these American girls who already got dibs on the kraken. [:
Fun piece, and I liked the attitude paired with the morning glory bloom effect. Good to be reading again. [:
Fun piece, and I liked the attitude paired with the morning glory bloom effect. Good to be reading again. [:
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re: Re: Chink char
12th Feb 2013 8:55pm
I'll tell him to get in line when I see him tomorrow my dear :-)
h to the fangin' h.
h to the fangin' h.
Re: Chink char
13th Feb 2013 7:03pm
ahhh...perhaps the caffeine in the coffee made him a bit more excited! lol.....Or not! :)
Thoroughly enjoyed this! xo
Thoroughly enjoyed this! xo
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re: Re: Chink char
27th Feb 2013 1:51am
well maybe...caffeine is too much for some blokes :-)
Good on you for rolling through.
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Good on you for rolling through.
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