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Gracefully
leaping gracefully
to the tempo
with a twirl to the crowd
her rhythmic trim of devotion
shown softly with each dainty step
pride illustrated from the sway of her hips
to the beauteous smile on her face
bounded daintily into the arms of her
darling
who stands steady to receive her
to softly glide her to victory
in-spite-of being her penumbra
not a concern to him
not a sting on his ego
just to gracefully guide her to victory
watch her feel the lyrics
with each dip and turn
he loses his place on the dance floor
and she wins his hand and heart
with her balletic melody of an angel
an exotic dancing angel
to the tempo
with a twirl to the crowd
her rhythmic trim of devotion
shown softly with each dainty step
pride illustrated from the sway of her hips
to the beauteous smile on her face
bounded daintily into the arms of her
darling
who stands steady to receive her
to softly glide her to victory
in-spite-of being her penumbra
not a concern to him
not a sting on his ego
just to gracefully guide her to victory
watch her feel the lyrics
with each dip and turn
he loses his place on the dance floor
and she wins his hand and heart
with her balletic melody of an angel
an exotic dancing angel
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Re: Gracefully
11th Feb 2013 5:33am
This was very sweet and sugary, maybe one is tender around Vday after all? >;) lol jk
Good write
<3 Caliban
Good write
<3 Caliban
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11th Feb 2013 2:30pm
Re: Gracefully
11th Feb 2013 7:09am
Caught my imagination from the first two lines... very well written, painting a picture past the end. A nice sentiment, too.
Peace
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Re: Gracefully
11th Feb 2013 1:17pm
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11th Feb 2013 2:25pm
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Re: Gracefully
11th Feb 2013 2:53pm
Hello
Fly little buttercup fly
twist my darling twist
turn sweetheart turn
and step one, two, three
the hardest part of the mambo, well any latin really but as you used the mambo... the hardest part for the angel is to learn to follow...
The New York the best part of a Mambo, or I think so anyway!
;]
Nice work hun, you dun it there you did!
Fly little buttercup fly
twist my darling twist
turn sweetheart turn
and step one, two, three
the hardest part of the mambo, well any latin really but as you used the mambo... the hardest part for the angel is to learn to follow...
The New York the best part of a Mambo, or I think so anyway!
;]
Nice work hun, you dun it there you did!
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Re: Gracefully
11th Feb 2013 7:25pm