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Anonymous
10th Feb 2013 10:50am
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10th Feb 2013 11:28am
Now, I'm not sure about the word choice, or punctuation. Maybe you could change 'fuck' to 'smear'? Just a suggestion.
It's definitely very emotive, evocative and well, deep. Imagery not so great, but it makes up for it in the sophisticated delivery. Can't help but think the title 'Poetry' is a metaphor for 'Melon' or something?
It's definitely very emotive, evocative and well, deep. Imagery not so great, but it makes up for it in the sophisticated delivery. Can't help but think the title 'Poetry' is a metaphor for 'Melon' or something?
10th Feb 2013 11:31am
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11th Feb 2013 11:49pm
Ha ha ha, for real?! To sum up all our thoughts with such brutal decision is truly a mark of beautiful intellect.
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13th Feb 2013 2:27am
Oh damn you know what I actually really like this. It speaks volumes in three words!! Nice xoxo
18th Feb 2013 4:38am
Two words.
You have these people in an uproar, with two words.
Haha, eloquently put.
You have these people in an uproar, with two words.
Haha, eloquently put.
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