Jungle Love

I read this line:
" I lick your lips like a pomegranate sweet!"

and I'm like "Ooo pomegranate."

and then I sit and think "Not a pomegranate, LIKE a pomegranate. duh."

whoops lol.
sweet poem anyways ♥ LIKE a pomegranate.

LOL

I'm glad you liked it my friend! Pomegranates are tasty fruit, especially Pomegranate juice. In Greek Mythology they were the forbidden fruit with which Hades enticed Persephone into becoming his queen, so there is a very strong sexual symbolism to the Pomegranate fruit since ancient times. So to me, a pair of sexy lips is much like a Pomegranate - an enticing fruit, sometimes even a forbidden one.

:) welcome. I love pomegranates lol. I know that story, I like greek mythology, it always has interested me, along with things like that...

sex and nature= two wonderful elements to combine.  The illustration and text dismissed my initial perceptions which were based on more modern songs with similar titles...

I am very, very  glad you liked my poem! It is quite different indeed, once someone gets into it, from what one might expect based on the title alone. Which makes for a pleasant surprise for the reader.

Hey there, Rew! Thanks for stopping by to comment... it is totally appreciated. I am delighted that you enjoyed giving my poem a read! Great contest, by the way. *Smiles* :)

This one 's so ah thought provoking and very very very eloquent essence.🌈👍🌷

It definitely brings such "wild" thoughts to one's mind, that is for certain! Wild, passionate, and intense... all the emotions that I was feeling when I penned this work. I always strive for a certain sort of eloquence in all of my writings be they poetic or otherwise, since to me the creation of a written work is in and of itself an art form... and as such I always strive to elevate my writing in ways that will make what I write a spectacle for the reader to savor and enjoy. Come to think of it, I always tend to speak with the same eloquence as well, which makes people often think that I am a lot more mature than I actually am. When actually, I have quite the childlike aspect to me... a highly intelligent childlike aspect, but childlike: nonetheless. One of many ways in which I am something of a harmonious union of dualities and opposite forces. I am delighted you enjoyed the read! Thank you for stopping by to comment upon it, too. :D

The welcomed u so ah greatly are. I ah thought about writing a jungle luv poem, but, I need to ah remember the jungle book and ghost write from it. That was the ah style I ah truly wanted to ah format within. 🤜💋👁️👍👁️🧅🥥🥦🥬🍜👄

That would make for a good poem, a love poem set in a primeval, jungle setting and involving a Tarzan-like character! I would totally read that, actually. :)

thank u.💋🤍🤎

Thankyou so much for entering this into the comp 🙏✨

Not a problem! It was my pleasure to do so. :)