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Melting
I reread your letters
over and over
some parts
are a million miles away
and others
are as fresh
as the moment
when I first received them.
The words drip
down on me
like melting ice cream,
the cool, sticky, liquid kind
that slides from one finger
to another
asking
rolling
repeating
begging
moaning
relinquishing
to be licked up,
and then I
reread the words
again and again
until the flavors
seem transfixed
in my mind.
At that moment
there, thinking
of you--
warm
and waiting,
your gentle breath
humming
its capacity
for yearning,
the cone drips through
and the stain on my clothes
cannot be wiped away
from the letters
those words
that rhythm,
that sticky
thought
of you.
runningturtle87
over and over
some parts
are a million miles away
and others
are as fresh
as the moment
when I first received them.
The words drip
down on me
like melting ice cream,
the cool, sticky, liquid kind
that slides from one finger
to another
asking
rolling
repeating
begging
moaning
relinquishing
to be licked up,
and then I
reread the words
again and again
until the flavors
seem transfixed
in my mind.
At that moment
there, thinking
of you--
warm
and waiting,
your gentle breath
humming
its capacity
for yearning,
the cone drips through
and the stain on my clothes
cannot be wiped away
from the letters
those words
that rhythm,
that sticky
thought
of you.
runningturtle87
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Re: Melting
9th Feb 2013 8:26pm
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Anonymous
9th Feb 2013 8:26pm
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9th Feb 2013 8:34pm
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9th Feb 2013 11:24pm
Mm, melting indeed. Two of my favs, ice cream and steamy letters. Lovely write, rt.
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10th Feb 2013 4:26am
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10th Feb 2013 4:27am
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- Edited 1st May 2021 7:45am
10th Feb 2013 1:29pm
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10th Feb 2013 8:50pm
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10th Feb 2013 10:05pm
The start had me thinking about letters soldiers sent home to loved ones but by the end I was conjuring up images of the hypnotic pulse and seduction of well played percussion instruments. A fine write here.
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10th Feb 2013 10:09pm
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14th Feb 2013 3:16am
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18th Feb 2013 1:57pm
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