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I Just Seen A Face but My Pen Looks At Them All The Same
I dream in specifics and write in generalities
or so it seems in regards to fantasy
For my dreams feature individuals
activities varied, more often good
naughty are many in counting
with a taking care of my wood
And even the bad ones
I recall the names and the deeds
if any more real
oh how my heart would so bleed
But in writing I reflect
and comes a sensual belief
that even the least comely female
can provide my wanted relief
Adorned with the knowledge
what she put on has such an affect
like a cat chasing a mouse
I am destined to make that trek
Not a figure sculpted from marble
is needed for what we will do
only left with one taste
when again is the craving due?
In fact a waif sort of scares me now
thinking of vigorous lovemaking and such
the v of the legs that is solid
so makes a man want to touch
Having something there to hold onto
with the trusts and shakes of the rod
like two trains that must collide
Am I mistaken or did she say something about god?
or so it seems in regards to fantasy
For my dreams feature individuals
activities varied, more often good
naughty are many in counting
with a taking care of my wood
And even the bad ones
I recall the names and the deeds
if any more real
oh how my heart would so bleed
But in writing I reflect
and comes a sensual belief
that even the least comely female
can provide my wanted relief
Adorned with the knowledge
what she put on has such an affect
like a cat chasing a mouse
I am destined to make that trek
Not a figure sculpted from marble
is needed for what we will do
only left with one taste
when again is the craving due?
In fact a waif sort of scares me now
thinking of vigorous lovemaking and such
the v of the legs that is solid
so makes a man want to touch
Having something there to hold onto
with the trusts and shakes of the rod
like two trains that must collide
Am I mistaken or did she say something about god?
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9th Feb 2013 5:02pm
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re: Re: I Just Seen A Face but My Pen Looks At Them All The Same
9th Feb 2013 5:05pm
Thanks--- I felt like I ran out of steam with this one, so it is nice to know at least a few lines didn't suck!
Re: I Just Seen A Face but My Pen Looks At Them All The Same
9th Feb 2013 5:03pm
Great write Bro. JAZZ!!!!!
PEN on!!!!!!!!
Enjoyed the read!
Sir Lancelott
PEN on!!!!!!!!
Enjoyed the read!
Sir Lancelott
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re: Re: I Just Seen A Face but My Pen Looks At Them All The Same
9th Feb 2013 5:07pm
Re: I Just Seen A Face but My Pen Looks At Them All The Same
Anonymous
9th Feb 2013 5:14pm
Nice poem
Enjoyed the read....
Enjoyed the read....
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re: Re: I Just Seen A Face but My Pen Looks At Them All The Same
9th Feb 2013 5:25pm
Anonymous
- Edited 9th Nov 2018 2:45pm
9th Feb 2013 6:27pm
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re: Re: I Just Seen A Face but My Pen Looks At Them All The Same
9th Feb 2013 8:44pm
You perception was indeed the intent. It however started off having nothing to do with sex.
Re: I Just Seen A Face but My Pen Looks At Them All The Same
9th Feb 2013 9:05pm
re: Re: I Just Seen A Face but My Pen Looks At Them All The Same
10th Feb 2013 3:21am
Oh yeah there have been some writes that would have been better off not published here but I appreciate the vote of confidence.
Re: I Just Seen A Face but My Pen Looks At Them All The Same
10th Feb 2013 3:40am
Usually I don't find the waifish look all that attractive either. Of course it depends on the individual but a few curves are always nice. :)
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re: Re: I Just Seen A Face but My Pen Looks At Them All The Same
10th Feb 2013 11:50am
Curves are usually good unless you are a homerun hitter or have a sportscar going around mountains in bad weather :)
Thanks for the read
Thanks for the read
Re: I Just Seen A Face but My Pen Looks At Them All The Same
11th Feb 2013 6:29am
"Having something there to hold onto
with the trusts and shakes of the rod
like two trains that must collide
Am I mistaken or did she say something about god?"<---lol....your not mistaken! Sweet Jesus tends to escape feverishly too.
Thoroughly enjoyed this, Jazz! :)
with the trusts and shakes of the rod
like two trains that must collide
Am I mistaken or did she say something about god?"<---lol....your not mistaken! Sweet Jesus tends to escape feverishly too.
Thoroughly enjoyed this, Jazz! :)
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re: Re: I Just Seen A Face but My Pen Looks At Them All The Same
11th Feb 2013 6:54am
Thanks for the info, not sure if there is any objectivity on the subject. (Maybe I need to check out a book about Wilt Chamberlain)
Always nice to know enjoyment was had!
Always nice to know enjoyment was had!
Re: I Just Seen A Face but My Pen Looks At Them All The Same
11th Feb 2013 9:26am
Am i mistaken did she say something about god?That line have a certain nostalgic feeling to me.Great work indeed.
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re: re: Re: I Just Seen A Face but My Pen Looks At Them All The Same
15th Feb 2013 12:20pm
Lol we sometimes hear some things,where you keep on asking yourself if you heard clearly when god and fuck are expressed on the same breath.I had someone like that who was a bit religious and a dirty talker at the same time but I liked it.
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15th Feb 2013 3:11pm
Then there are those who hear the word "god" and think that the person is talking about them! (smile)
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15th Feb 2013 5:36pm
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15th Feb 2013 10:31pm
Maybe but with the state of affairs for the human family these days, I know that is a title I wouldn't want to have.