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Angel
called
out into the open
by hushed silences
earth soft and
pure
white glistening
fallen snow
world glows
in refracting light
mesmerized by
beauty cold
covered in a blanket
of warmth
slowly she lays herself
into the shimmery
cloud
warmth melts
her body into it
lay gazing
everything coated
milky white
single flake comes
floating swirling down
entranced by
its slow journey
falling to where
she lay
lands so gently
carefully
as if it were
planned
kissing her
lips
out into the open
by hushed silences
earth soft and
pure
white glistening
fallen snow
world glows
in refracting light
mesmerized by
beauty cold
covered in a blanket
of warmth
slowly she lays herself
into the shimmery
cloud
warmth melts
her body into it
lay gazing
everything coated
milky white
single flake comes
floating swirling down
entranced by
its slow journey
falling to where
she lay
lands so gently
carefully
as if it were
planned
kissing her
lips
Published 8th Feb 2013
| Edited 18th Mar 2023
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16th Feb 2013 7:47am
And it lands so gently,
so carefully, as if it were
planned,
and kisses my
lips.
Wonderful ending, bringing the whole poem to a solemn close. Powerful.
so carefully, as if it were
planned,
and kisses my
lips.
Wonderful ending, bringing the whole poem to a solemn close. Powerful.
16th Feb 2013 3:06pm
