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Smiling eyes ( her eyes comp)
Eyes that see through the ice
into the soul
melting everything slowly
intensity so fierce
making liquid love all over the sheets
kisses imprinted across the heart
to mark the love of a lover
this sin is forgivable
and heaven is reachable
with just a look in her smiling eyes
into the soul
melting everything slowly
intensity so fierce
making liquid love all over the sheets
kisses imprinted across the heart
to mark the love of a lover
this sin is forgivable
and heaven is reachable
with just a look in her smiling eyes
Published 8th Feb 2013
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8th Feb 2013 3:47pm
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8th Feb 2013 5:18pm
Darlin
This made me smile...
You need to flesh this out. You have lyrics hiding in there I think ;)
This made me smile...
You need to flesh this out. You have lyrics hiding in there I think ;)
8th Feb 2013 9:41pm
8th Feb 2013 9:23pm
sweetness penned. the overall emotion creates a positive feelin for the reader...like it's never over and always worth it, well gi..........
8th Feb 2013 9:42pm
9th Feb 2013 4:37am
A short, but very sweet piece, it has a fragile tone, it's soothing to read Gigi, well done. :-) And the picture of you suits it well. Keep the faith!
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