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I Never Put Much Thought Into Titles
I guess I have to
live through it all
If I am still breathing
then something is missing
live through it all
If I am still breathing
then something is missing
Published 5th Feb 2013
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Anonymous
5th Feb 2013 10:42pm
And what, pray tell, is missing?
Lovely, but kinda short...feels incomplete?
Pen on!
Tidespotter
Lovely, but kinda short...feels incomplete?
Pen on!
Tidespotter
i guess, it's already complete :)
seems to me the poem was partly meant to invoke the impression of incompleteness to transport the vague feeling that there's something that is missing, but hard to describe besides its correlation to being alive :)
seems to me the poem was partly meant to invoke the impression of incompleteness to transport the vague feeling that there's something that is missing, but hard to describe besides its correlation to being alive :)
Anonymous
6th Feb 2013 7:30am
Oh, yeah.....of course!
Brilliant, know thyself. BRILLIANT!
Shoulda seen that. Silly me.
Glad you showed the way :-))
Gracias.
Peace
Tidespotter
Brilliant, know thyself. BRILLIANT!
Shoulda seen that. Silly me.
Glad you showed the way :-))
Gracias.
Peace
Tidespotter
6th Feb 2013 9:47am
Thanks for reading and commenting.The words just came to me and I just penned them down hoping they would make some sense to someone.
