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DayQuil, you're wonderful

DayQuil, �DayQuil
When will those coughs all disappear?
DayQuil, DayQuil
Where will it lead us from here?
With phlegmin' in our throats and no money in our coats
You can't say we're satisfied
But DayQuil, DayQuil
You can't say we never tried

DayQuil, you're wonderful
But I hate the sadness with your price
DayQuil, I still love you daily
Remember all those nights we cried
All the times I held you close
Sipping you until I choke
Let me whisper in your ear
DayQuil, DayQuil
Where will it lead us from here? Yeah

All the times I held you close
Sipping you until I choke
Hate the sadness with your price
But DayQuil, I still love you daily
Everywhere I look for a better price
There ain't medicine that comes close to you
Come on baby dry my eyes
But DayQuil, DayQuil
Ain't it good to be alive
DayQuil, DayQuil, you can't say we never tried

Written by artkytech

Published 5th Feb 2013

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Re: DayQuil, you're wonderful

Anonymous

- Edited 5th Feb 2013 6:21am

5th Feb 2013 6:20am

Ok.
So, you're a Stones fan.

Cool poem.

Now as much as I love that name DayQuil.....who or what is it?
A loved one, a pet, a fave stationery set...what?
:-)

Pen on, Art!

Cheers
Tidespotter

Ps. "flemming".....intended or not, as a pun? Alternative being...phlegming...?

Just curious, ok.

Re: DayQuil, you're wonderful

artkytech

- Edited 5th Feb 2013 6:35am

5th Feb 2013 6:27am

ah yes, will fix typo now, thank you. DayQuil is a cough suppressant, liquid form, for colds and flu relief. :) I dont use it much, but have been the last week and that song "Angie" by the Stones popped in my head, but with the word DayQuil instead. So I decided t ojot it down ;)