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Moon Drowned
music in the sighing
touch the soul through skin song
whispers from the stars
trembling blades of grass
candles glow your name
as the burn follows the flame
AWAKE
that i may touch
mornings dew on your lips
yearning inside
voice of a calm storm
music the sound of thunder
blood as liquid lightning
shutterframe moment
sign language of the heart
scratching the deep
to find the itch
looking beyond your eyes
twin moons reflecting light
echoes of the soul
speak words the mouth can't utter
WATCHING
rise and dip of angels wings
pulling stars from your hair
sliding into your velvet
moondrowned
we are our own tapestry
touch the soul through skin song
whispers from the stars
trembling blades of grass
candles glow your name
as the burn follows the flame
AWAKE
that i may touch
mornings dew on your lips
yearning inside
voice of a calm storm
music the sound of thunder
blood as liquid lightning
shutterframe moment
sign language of the heart
scratching the deep
to find the itch
looking beyond your eyes
twin moons reflecting light
echoes of the soul
speak words the mouth can't utter
WATCHING
rise and dip of angels wings
pulling stars from your hair
sliding into your velvet
moondrowned
we are our own tapestry
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Re: Moon Drowned
30th Jan 2013 2:33pm
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10th Feb 2013 10:50pm
Re: Moon Drowned
30th Jan 2013 3:00pm
Mesmerizing and enchanting, such beautifu use of words "pulling stars from your hair" I love this
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10th Feb 2013 10:50pm
Anonymous
- Edited 1st May 2021 7:45am
30th Jan 2013 3:19pm
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re: Re: Moon Drowned
10th Feb 2013 10:52pm
Re: Moon Drowned
30th Jan 2013 3:21pm
Enchanting, sir.
Took me to another place,
words weaved together skillfully.
Imagery entwined with the senses.
Well written,
Scribbler.
Took me to another place,
words weaved together skillfully.
Imagery entwined with the senses.
Well written,
Scribbler.
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re: Re: Moon Drowned
10th Feb 2013 10:54pm
Re: Moon Drowned
Anonymous
3rd Feb 2013 4:15pm
very well done ken...thanks strider

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Re: Moon Drowned
3rd Feb 2013 8:25pm
Hey SMK,
This is Stunning, my friend!
Only you and your scribe, has the power to distract my soul! I'd gladly 'drown' in your ink!
Love This! :) xo
This is Stunning, my friend!
Only you and your scribe, has the power to distract my soul! I'd gladly 'drown' in your ink!
Love This! :) xo
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re: Re: Moon Drowned
10th Feb 2013 10:56pm
Re: Moon Drowned
Anonymous
- Edited 11th Feb 2013 6:18am
4th Feb 2013 7:59pm
Oooh, tender does not begin to describe what you have managed to evoke here, S M K.
Poignant and ...quivering, I daresay.
LOVE the read!
Thanks for sharing.
Pen on, poet!
Cheers
Tidespotter
Ps. This poem is like a liquid-Kodak moment... :-)
A beaut!
Poignant and ...quivering, I daresay.
LOVE the read!
Thanks for sharing.
Pen on, poet!
Cheers
Tidespotter
Ps. This poem is like a liquid-Kodak moment... :-)
A beaut!

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re: Re: Moon Drowned
10th Feb 2013 10:59pm