deepundergroundpoetry.com
One
I am one with myself
no one completes me
nor will they ever
I do what is right
and if it means
doing wrong
so be it
I am flesh
as you are
I bleed
I cry
I feel
I hate
and above all
I die, you die
we die
nothing makes you better
nothing makes you worse
we are one in the same
though we look different
grow, grow tall
don't get stunted
and lost
get real
stop dwelling
start healing,
before you are
forced to do all over again,
die for the final time
be one with yourself
then one with the universe
ashes to ashes
no one completes me
nor will they ever
I do what is right
and if it means
doing wrong
so be it
I am flesh
as you are
I bleed
I cry
I feel
I hate
and above all
I die, you die
we die
nothing makes you better
nothing makes you worse
we are one in the same
though we look different
grow, grow tall
don't get stunted
and lost
get real
stop dwelling
start healing,
before you are
forced to do all over again,
die for the final time
be one with yourself
then one with the universe
ashes to ashes
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
likes 10
reading list entries 0
comments 23
reads 1084
Commenting Preference:
The author encourages honest critique.
Re: One
28th Jan 2013 10:29pm
dust to dust baby .......
Lord how I wish I could stop dying a thousand deaths.....
BullsEye Nikkeeeeeeeee
Lord how I wish I could stop dying a thousand deaths.....
BullsEye Nikkeeeeeeeee
1
re: Re: One
28th Jan 2013 10:30pm
re: re: Re: One
28th Jan 2013 10:33pm
re: re: re: re: Re: One
but...........
think of all the poetry that comes out of
Driveling Pussy..............
think of all the poetry that comes out of
Driveling Pussy..............
1
re: re: re: re: re: Re: One
29th Jan 2013 2:38pm
re: re: re: re: re: re: Re: One
29th Jan 2013 9:21pm
Re: One
28th Jan 2013 11:47pm
Re: One
29th Jan 2013 00:46am
"I do what is right
and if it means
doing wrong
so be it"
Oh the number of times I've made descisions like that! Very perceptive ink Nikki Write more please!
and if it means
doing wrong
so be it"
Oh the number of times I've made descisions like that! Very perceptive ink Nikki Write more please!
2
re: Re: One
29th Jan 2013 2:40pm
Re: One
29th Jan 2013 5:53am
right and wrong are just a belief.
Kinda like how the world use to be flat... Sometimes being bad is a good thing, right?
Kinda like how the world use to be flat... Sometimes being bad is a good thing, right?
1
re: Re: One
29th Jan 2013 2:42pm
your so right :) lol and yes being bad can be a good thing....its the whole beauty and the eye of the beholder thing too :) I have my own idea of right and wrong and I'm sure you have yours
Re: One
Anonymous
29th Jan 2013 9:49am
Nicely written, a thought provoking piece.
Very much enjoyed this!
Very much enjoyed this!
1
Re: One
Anonymous
29th Jan 2013 4:57pm
This is fantastic Nikki. First and second stanzas especially hit home, but all of it was perfectly said. Like an upgrade to the serenity prayer!
1
Re: One
29th Jan 2013 7:57pm
WOW! I love this. Even though we look different, we are still the same. Such powerful words. Great job Nikkimoe.
1
Re: One
30th Jan 2013 3:02pm
nice to see someone tryin't look toward some transcendence kinda...beside
thee all-too-common
i-me-mine
rant'n'roll
may the g'odd i-don't-believe-in
bless ye
all ways
thee all-too-common
i-me-mine
rant'n'roll
may the g'odd i-don't-believe-in
bless ye
all ways
0