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Just A Waste.
You go for my kiss,
but you do nothing but miss.
You think i'd go that low,
and have nothing left to show?
Can't you see I truly believe
that you're just fucking naive?
Why they let you breath
is beneath my belief.
To waste oxygen on you
just makes me fucking rue the day
that you came to be.
Why did they have to plea?
To keep a soul so crucially dull?
The mystery keeps me in undying agony.
but you do nothing but miss.
You think i'd go that low,
and have nothing left to show?
Can't you see I truly believe
that you're just fucking naive?
Why they let you breath
is beneath my belief.
To waste oxygen on you
just makes me fucking rue the day
that you came to be.
Why did they have to plea?
To keep a soul so crucially dull?
The mystery keeps me in undying agony.
Published 27th Jan 2013
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Anonymous
27th Jan 2013 10:51am
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28th Jan 2013 2:35am
28th Jan 2013 2:51pm
I think this poem belongs in the anger category. I sense a lot anger in this. I don't really have anything to say that you can work on for this poem, so I tip my hat off to you for writing greatness Ivy.
Chaos_Collector
Chaos_Collector
29th Jan 2013 6:50am
Thank you o:
I am still in debate on what category i just kind of sat it somewhere for the meanwhile..
I am still in debate on what category i just kind of sat it somewhere for the meanwhile..
29th Jan 2013 11:25pm
You're welcome :)
I definitely think it belongs in the anger category, but I guess it could sit here in the dark category too. At any rate, the poem will be read and that's what matters most
I definitely think it belongs in the anger category, but I guess it could sit here in the dark category too. At any rate, the poem will be read and that's what matters most
