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what it is you have to offer
this could be the beginning
of something beautiful
but i musn't plan the future
i will extract no promises
from you and i in turn
can promise you nothing
i can be free enough to
be myself with you but i
can only hope you feel the same
and most of all i expect
nothing of you for it is then and
only then i can enjoy
what it is you have to offer
of something beautiful
but i musn't plan the future
i will extract no promises
from you and i in turn
can promise you nothing
i can be free enough to
be myself with you but i
can only hope you feel the same
and most of all i expect
nothing of you for it is then and
only then i can enjoy
what it is you have to offer
Published 26th Jan 2013
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Anonymous
26th Jan 2013 4:53am
A beautifully penned, wise, insightful poem, Faith. I love the soothing tone in this piece! Lovely! :)
Carlene
Carlene
8th Feb 2013 10:45pm
Anonymous
26th Jan 2013 6:24am
Yes, Faith, giving and receiving...
The bounds of love. Nicely written.
The bounds of love. Nicely written.
8th Feb 2013 10:46pm
26th Jan 2013 9:36am
Wise words indeed Faith, most promises can not been 100% guaranteed and many are empty.
Great pen dear :)
Great pen dear :)
8th Feb 2013 10:47pm
