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REPLY TO 'EXPOSE YOUR POETRY'

An imagined,smitten poet's response to poem by Kitty aka Somelikeithot.

It started as a wistful thought
When on that night my eye you caught.
After we chatted, had a dance
I sensed an oncoming romance.
We parted but you left for me
An email address, to contact thee.
I couldn't get out of my mind
Your ample curves, so well defined.
My feelings deepened towards lust
About your shapely hips and bust.
But I feared that you would rebuff
Me for talking in red hot stuff.
My language kept under control,
I tried a way to bare my soul.

So I sent a diplomatic
Verse, warm-hearted and dramatic
With enough touchy-feelyness
And underlying gentleness.
Your poetic reply to me
Showed how much we shared chemistry,
How of my presence you want more,
Sending strong signals to my core.
Yes, let's meet up so we can be
Together making poetry,
In-out of each other's places,
Looking in each other's faces.
You started as my 'Fancied One',
Now, as lovers, we've just begun.
Written by Solomon_Song
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