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Aqua
I need you
you are part
of me,
you are
most of me
without you
I am nothing
literally,
the world
could not
exist
the moon
would have
nothing to do
without you
mankind is
doomed
I am here
because of you
yet I am
afraid to take
you in,
to drink you down
they have poisoned
the foundation
of life
in the name
of docility
you are part
of me,
you are
most of me
without you
I am nothing
literally,
the world
could not
exist
the moon
would have
nothing to do
without you
mankind is
doomed
I am here
because of you
yet I am
afraid to take
you in,
to drink you down
they have poisoned
the foundation
of life
in the name
of docility
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Re: Aqua
25th Jan 2013 3:18pm
Re: Aqua
25th Jan 2013 4:05pm
This is a very good poem,
they have poisoned
the foundation
of life
in the name
of docility
Need I say more?
Well written :)
they have poisoned
the foundation
of life
in the name
of docility
Need I say more?
Well written :)
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Re: Aqua
25th Jan 2013 6:05pm
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25th Jan 2013 10:30pm
Re: Aqua
26th Jan 2013 10:23am
Very well done with this Nikkiemoe, an especially nice touch on the ending.
Uley
Uley
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Re: Aqua
26th Jan 2013 7:40pm
Re: Aqua
26th Jan 2013 9:35pm
awesome miss nikki... in alot of places bottled water is more expensive than gas nowadays....
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re: Re: Aqua
26th Jan 2013 9:52pm
this world is nuts everything is ass backwards...
thanks for reading Johnrot!
thanks for reading Johnrot!
Re: Aqua
29th Jan 2013 2:22am
Water is everyone's father and yet humanity murders it just as he did his own mother.
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re: Re: Aqua
29th Jan 2013 2:34pm
Re: Aqua
29th Jan 2013 5:15am
I Love The Things You Write About, Its not just nonsence and rambling (although that is still awesome) it has a message and it has emotion and its just beautiful! you are an amazing Poet Nikki
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