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no more
You have the key to my heart
You and me should never be apart
Theres a problem between you and me
Theres just one thing that can't be
I couldn't keep the promise
but to be honest
I think im done with you
that something that you dont know
Im going to move on
so bye bye be gone
You and me should never be apart
Theres a problem between you and me
Theres just one thing that can't be
I couldn't keep the promise
but to be honest
I think im done with you
that something that you dont know
Im going to move on
so bye bye be gone
Published 25th Jan 2013
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6th Feb 2013 2:15pm
Good poem....a few corrections though....
dont- don't
commas between so bye bye........
great poem though
keep writing!!!!
dont- don't
commas between so bye bye........
great poem though
keep writing!!!!
