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for the moment
.....for the moment,
my hands are now your hands
rubbing my body all over.....
....up and down
I feel you pinching my nipples,
rubbing my chest
Give me pleasure woman,
and I shall do the rest.
Touching me in places
that for the moment
only your mind has seen
Thoughts of you make my insides tingle;
Your body on top of mine
my soul wants to scream
Please, stroke my carnal nature
firm, hard and strong
Your sweet sugary walls,
they are mine
Right there, right now.....
.....I belong
To feel my pending, creamy explosions
Bursting deep within
Your pussy is hot, wet and so satisfying
I'm feeling just like I am .......
......inside you right now.
We come together in mind
across this barren space
I want you so badly and
I hope you know
that one day
this hand shall be replaced
with your body, your spirit.....your erotic, poetic love
a cosmic, metaphysical powerful interconnection.
Tonight, I channel my longing to you
I will my deep desires
completely towards your direction.
for the moment baby,
I have cum!!!!!
......to the point of wet hands
and utopic, erotic pleasure.
I close my eyes and I see
another time and another place
In your land of passion
with it's beautiful flowing waters.
You shall then see
this glorious smile that your love
has put upon.....
........my face.
Published 23rd Jan 2013
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23rd Jan 2013 7:30am
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23rd Jan 2013 7:34am
23rd Jan 2013 7:37am
Damn, Archie!
This write is so sensual, I wish I was the one replacing your hand! This was such an enjoyable read before bedtime. Thanks for sharing your moment! ;)
This write is so sensual, I wish I was the one replacing your hand! This was such an enjoyable read before bedtime. Thanks for sharing your moment! ;)
23rd Jan 2013 7:40am
23rd Jan 2013 6:51pm
Enjoyed the read..and the visual of the pic .. :) my favorite line "this hand shall be replaced
with your body, your spirit.....your erotic, poetic love
a cosmic, metaphysical powerful interconnection. "
with your body, your spirit.....your erotic, poetic love
a cosmic, metaphysical powerful interconnection. "
23rd Jan 2013 6:56pm
So ironic how you were commenting on my poem as i was commenting on yours.
Thank you. I think it is so sexy that one can be moved to arousal and strong release simply by the thoughts and memories of that *special* someone.
Mmmm, mmm, mmm
Thank you. I think it is so sexy that one can be moved to arousal and strong release simply by the thoughts and memories of that *special* someone.
Mmmm, mmm, mmm
23rd Jan 2013 7:19pm
That is a bit ironic!! :) Those thoughts, memories, and...whew...bout to get myself in trouble over here!! lol...focus Nik..focus...!!! :)
23rd Jan 2013 8:47pm
Wow! This took me there! Caught up in the orgasmic moment of sweet love making!
You make a girl wish she was part of your ink, if only 'for the moment'! :)
You make a girl wish she was part of your ink, if only 'for the moment'! :)
I'm glad that my "Voyage To Atlantis" called your name and you boarded my "vessel". : )
"If I were A carpenter and you were a lady........" (smh)
Thank you Rain for the comment and taking the time to read me : )
"If I were A carpenter and you were a lady........" (smh)
Thank you Rain for the comment and taking the time to read me : )
Anonymous
23rd Jan 2013 9:58pm
MrM,
Holy tube of lube Batman! You really pulled it off this time! LOL!!! No, really, I have to hand it to you, GREAT write! ; )
tornado
Holy tube of lube Batman! You really pulled it off this time! LOL!!! No, really, I have to hand it to you, GREAT write! ; )
tornado
24th Jan 2013 5:46am
LMAO!!!!!! Man you hit the jokey joke button 3 times. You got a brother's side hurtin'.
"Holy tube of lube Batman! You really pulled it off this time! LOL!!! No, really, I have to hand it to you, GREAT write! ; )" LOL
"Holy tube of lube Batman! You really pulled it off this time! LOL!!! No, really, I have to hand it to you, GREAT write! ; )" LOL
24th Jan 2013 5:31am
I agree with your reply to the comment above that it is super hot and sexy when someone can be "moved to arousal and strong release" simply by thinking of that one special person. I have had some interesting experience in that regard....
Sigh..... Want to get into that groove again and your poem got me thinking in that direction...
Thank you!
Sigh..... Want to get into that groove again and your poem got me thinking in that direction...
Thank you!
24th Jan 2013 5:47am
You know your welcome Scarlet and thank you for the read. Perfect, poetic motivation! : )
24th Jan 2013 5:56am
First I have to say I appreciate you using a word I for one don't see in a poem much. (utopic)
My favorite part is "with your body, your spirit.....your erotic, poetic love
a cosmic, metaphysical powerful interconnection.
The title reminded me of Steve Perry's "If Only For The Moment".
My favorite part is "with your body, your spirit.....your erotic, poetic love
a cosmic, metaphysical powerful interconnection.
The title reminded me of Steve Perry's "If Only For The Moment".
24th Jan 2013 6:17am
Thanks Jazz. I remember that song like it was yesterday too. The things that a woman's aura will do to you (smh)
Lawd, Lawd, Lawd. lol
Lawd, Lawd, Lawd. lol
28th Jan 2013 3:53am
And one of those moments led to the greatest of moments!:):) Must we all be in your bedroom!?!! Your style of writing is alluring and always stimulating to the senses. Loved it!!
28th Jan 2013 4:55am
Glad that my writing is stimulating and i have to admit, I hope that it is marketable. Planning on publishing soon...........
