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Before Me
Before my eyes,
I saw...I saw....
Before my ears,
I heard...I heard....
Before my tongue,
I tasted...I tasted....
Before my touch,
I felt...I felt....
Before my feelings,
I fell into despair....
Before my soul,
I was left bare under a piercing presence....
Then all was struck down,
Down...down...down...down into darkness...forever!
I saw...I saw....
Before my ears,
I heard...I heard....
Before my tongue,
I tasted...I tasted....
Before my touch,
I felt...I felt....
Before my feelings,
I fell into despair....
Before my soul,
I was left bare under a piercing presence....
Then all was struck down,
Down...down...down...down into darkness...forever!
Published 22nd Jan 2013
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22nd Jan 2013 2:47am
"Before my soul,
I was left bare under a piercing presence...."
Love that ^^^line!
Great Read! :)
I was left bare under a piercing presence...."
Love that ^^^line!
Great Read! :)
