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I love you I hate you
How could you give me such joy then give me such pain give me peace of mind then drive me insane... I don't want you to stay but I'd die if you go I don't need you at all but without you theres no hope I hate your ass i can't stand your guts but I love your kisses and need your touch I don't want to live with the way you play games with my heart but we're going to die together we're never going to part you make me crazy i just want this to end but what would i do if i didn't have my best friend I love you and i hate you all in the same I can't have one without the other so i will forever play this game
Published 11th Jan 2013
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11th Jan 2013 5:55pm
Sweets, on the first line are you saying I don't want you "TO" stay but I'd
other than that sweets I loved it I think folks go through that type of shit at least once in their lifetime. I'm still a fan of yours
other than that sweets I loved it I think folks go through that type of shit at least once in their lifetime. I'm still a fan of yours
11th Jan 2013 8:46pm
11th Jan 2013 6:01pm
11th Jan 2013 8:47pm
I love it when someone can read what I write and relate. Thank you Comfort in Words
William "Smokey" Robinson penned a similar song back inthe 60's......"You Really Got A Hold On Me" and it is indeed a great truth today. "sometimes love has no rhyme; has no reason" This is a great depiction of the same. : )
"I don't like you, but I love you
Seems that I'm always thinkin' of you
Oh Oh Oh
You treat me badly, I love you madly
You've really got a hold on me
I don't want you, but I need you
Don't wanna kiss you, but I need to
Oh oh oh
You do me wrong now, my love is strong now
You've really got a hold on me
Baby, I love you and all I want you to do
Is just hold me, hold me, hold me, hold me
Tighter, tighter
I wanna leave you, don't wanna stay here
Don't wanna spend another day here
Oh Oh Oh
I wanna split now, I can't quit now
You've really got a hold on me
"I don't like you, but I love you
Seems that I'm always thinkin' of you
Oh Oh Oh
You treat me badly, I love you madly
You've really got a hold on me
I don't want you, but I need you
Don't wanna kiss you, but I need to
Oh oh oh
You do me wrong now, my love is strong now
You've really got a hold on me
Baby, I love you and all I want you to do
Is just hold me, hold me, hold me, hold me
Tighter, tighter
I wanna leave you, don't wanna stay here
Don't wanna spend another day here
Oh Oh Oh
I wanna split now, I can't quit now
You've really got a hold on me
11th Jan 2013 8:49pm
11th Jan 2013 8:05pm
I always enjoy when you show more of your complex dimensions. A peak beneath the slanted eyes. Anyways I personally like your more serious minded poems the most out your work and anticipate the next installment.
11th Jan 2013 8:51pm
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14th Jan 2013 3:49pm
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11th Oct 2013 8:17pm
I echo what Musically said and add a rock song that this reminds me of, U2's "With Or Without You".
11th Oct 2013 11:05pm
Thank you Jazzmanor I haven't written in a while but after reading your comments you motivated me to pivk up my pen. Thank you very much
12th Oct 2013 00:40am
