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something else
"what do men want?
you say i don't know
but i know
what men want
you ask what then
men want something else
other than what?
other than what they have
of course
you admit for some men
that's true
why waste what you have
worrying about what
you don't have and
what will you want
once you've lasso'd me
something else---or what?"
you say i don't know
but i know
what men want
you ask what then
men want something else
other than what?
other than what they have
of course
you admit for some men
that's true
why waste what you have
worrying about what
you don't have and
what will you want
once you've lasso'd me
something else---or what?"
Published 3rd Jan 2013
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3rd Jan 2013 5:03pm
Anonymous
3rd Jan 2013 6:56pm
Very nicely penned, Faith, and I love the finish:
what will you want
once you've lasso'd me
something else---or what?"
:)
what will you want
once you've lasso'd me
something else---or what?"
:)
Anonymous
3rd Jan 2013 8:42pm
Yes Faith Elizabeth, maybe a lasso would do...
(How that would be in practise though, Im not sure...lol) But limits yes, thats the key word
(How that would be in practise though, Im not sure...lol) But limits yes, thats the key word
3rd Jan 2013 11:57pm
