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The Misery of Misogyny
Your face has launched a thousand ships
Forbidden fruit dripped from your lips
Forever cursed to be alone
All that you gaze will turn to stone
Like the devil you have been sent
To spread affliction and discontent
Cast out by God a fallen star
Vainglorious is who you are
Total rejection decided man's fate
Just like a mantis consuming her mate
You are the root of eternal sin
Stealing men’s souls with one touch of skin
Injected weakness in man's worst defeat
Flowing with venom and noisome conceit
All of life’s problems have you to blame
The world was just fine until women came
You are a woman have you no shame
Back to the serpent where death calls your name
Evil Succubus that preys on man's lust
I spit in your face in utter disgust
You scheme and connive demanding respect
When transparent sex has no effect
Resorting to tears with bait for the snare
Patiently waiting for someone to care
Diffuser of gossip chameleon of lies
Passing down judgments behind your disguise
Wretched sycophant you schmooze everyone
With a fake smile that can’t be outdone
Your kind of head games take always first prize
Wicked intentions with no compromise
Always touching your lips with red finger tips
I hate how you pose with your hands on your hips
Toss slightly your hair and tease with your eyes
That bounce as you walk I so much despise
Your shoes keep clicking as you swing side to side
Drawing attention to your flaunting backside
Serial killers are born of your womb
Promising offspring a future of doom
No sadder excuse for having no use
Besides mistreatment and constant abuse
Always you're right, so smugly you gloat
If I hear that again I will cut your throat
Now prostrate yourself and bow before me
A subaltern breed is all you will be
There’s no place for you but down on your knees
Don’t ever get up unless you say please
Even fellatio you still are no good
I’d do it myself if I only could
So show me just one redeeming feature
You complicated pathetic creature
There in your mirror you worship and stare
You never notice the snakes in your hair
I hate myself for still needing you
But I’d rather die than admit it is true
Hatred of women has just one regret
That lonely feeling I cannot forget
Power hungry beast I won’t be controlled
Whatever it takes I will break your hold
Life without women wouldn't that be great
Til then I’ll suffer a victim of hate
You are a Medusa,
a seductress,
a Jezebel,
a harlot,
an ogress,
a termagant,
a slattern,
a virago,
a harridan,
a strumpet,
You are a woman
Forbidden fruit dripped from your lips
Forever cursed to be alone
All that you gaze will turn to stone
Like the devil you have been sent
To spread affliction and discontent
Cast out by God a fallen star
Vainglorious is who you are
Total rejection decided man's fate
Just like a mantis consuming her mate
You are the root of eternal sin
Stealing men’s souls with one touch of skin
Injected weakness in man's worst defeat
Flowing with venom and noisome conceit
All of life’s problems have you to blame
The world was just fine until women came
You are a woman have you no shame
Back to the serpent where death calls your name
Evil Succubus that preys on man's lust
I spit in your face in utter disgust
You scheme and connive demanding respect
When transparent sex has no effect
Resorting to tears with bait for the snare
Patiently waiting for someone to care
Diffuser of gossip chameleon of lies
Passing down judgments behind your disguise
Wretched sycophant you schmooze everyone
With a fake smile that can’t be outdone
Your kind of head games take always first prize
Wicked intentions with no compromise
Always touching your lips with red finger tips
I hate how you pose with your hands on your hips
Toss slightly your hair and tease with your eyes
That bounce as you walk I so much despise
Your shoes keep clicking as you swing side to side
Drawing attention to your flaunting backside
Serial killers are born of your womb
Promising offspring a future of doom
No sadder excuse for having no use
Besides mistreatment and constant abuse
Always you're right, so smugly you gloat
If I hear that again I will cut your throat
Now prostrate yourself and bow before me
A subaltern breed is all you will be
There’s no place for you but down on your knees
Don’t ever get up unless you say please
Even fellatio you still are no good
I’d do it myself if I only could
So show me just one redeeming feature
You complicated pathetic creature
There in your mirror you worship and stare
You never notice the snakes in your hair
I hate myself for still needing you
But I’d rather die than admit it is true
Hatred of women has just one regret
That lonely feeling I cannot forget
Power hungry beast I won’t be controlled
Whatever it takes I will break your hold
Life without women wouldn't that be great
Til then I’ll suffer a victim of hate
You are a Medusa,
a seductress,
a Jezebel,
a harlot,
an ogress,
a termagant,
a slattern,
a virago,
a harridan,
a strumpet,
You are a woman
Published 30th Dec 2012
| Edited 30th Jun 2015
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Anonymous
30th Dec 2012 5:11am
It's true ;) I am a woman. But ogress...I'm having a hard time picturing me next to Shrek...XD
You write very angrily.
Scary.
I do not wanna get on your bad side. lol.
I had a really hard time choosing winners...I should've chosen this one. Grr. Sorry dude.
You write very angrily.
Scary.
I do not wanna get on your bad side. lol.
I had a really hard time choosing winners...I should've chosen this one. Grr. Sorry dude.
Anonymous
31st Dec 2012 1:55pm
That is very nice of you.
Haha okay, that, is some way to describe an ogress. LOL. Nice vocab you go goin there ;)
There's always something to be angry about.
Ohhh you are even more depressing than me sometimes, Mourningcloak. Be nicer to yourself.
I'm not too worried ;)
Haha okay, that, is some way to describe an ogress. LOL. Nice vocab you go goin there ;)
There's always something to be angry about.
Ohhh you are even more depressing than me sometimes, Mourningcloak. Be nicer to yourself.
I'm not too worried ;)
How the heck did you get my ex's bio-data?...it is quite uncanny...
2 small errors of syntax which is what I suspect Q o A picked up on. Otherwise a great and extremely hilarious read for me.
2 small errors of syntax which is what I suspect Q o A picked up on. Otherwise a great and extremely hilarious read for me.
31st Dec 2012 11:20am
The only judge of your work should be you in the long term. I joined this site because I am an amateur poet and feel at ease with all the other amateurs here. It is refreshing to see such talent as yours.
30th Dec 2012 5:09pm
30th Dec 2012 5:48pm
Wow great poem must have taken a while write but at last it is very good I know there are definitely people in my life I would want to direct this to but still this is a very good poem and I'm going to put it in my reading list
Anonymous
7th Jan 2013 10:27pm
Fabulous effort!
Takes a reading or two to really get the full gist.
Yes, angry indeed.
May I share an idea?
Maybe tryna catch another's tail might do the trick... :-)
As I said, just a thought.
Particularly love these:
*chameleon of lies
*I hate myself for still needing you
But I’d rather die than admit it is true
*There’s no place for you but down on your knees
Don’t ever get up unless you say please
And then, you throw us a Shakespeare, but where he had an opposing idea in the rhyming couplet at the end, you hide it elsewhere, hey?
*Life without women wouldn't that be great
Til then I’ll suffer a victim of hate
Clever.
I like.
Keep this going, M - Cloak!
Cheers
Tidespotter
Takes a reading or two to really get the full gist.
Yes, angry indeed.
May I share an idea?
Maybe tryna catch another's tail might do the trick... :-)
As I said, just a thought.
Particularly love these:
*chameleon of lies
*I hate myself for still needing you
But I’d rather die than admit it is true
*There’s no place for you but down on your knees
Don’t ever get up unless you say please
And then, you throw us a Shakespeare, but where he had an opposing idea in the rhyming couplet at the end, you hide it elsewhere, hey?
*Life without women wouldn't that be great
Til then I’ll suffer a victim of hate
Clever.
I like.
Keep this going, M - Cloak!
Cheers
Tidespotter
Anonymous
8th Jan 2013 3:43pm
Re: tail
You responded to Q of A:
I keep looking for my good side but never seem to find it, like a dog that keeps trying to catch his tail but never catches it.
Maybe...er...leave that tail...chase someone else's.
Just kidding, ok.
Do wonder why you say you never seem to find bright/good side... Cos...er...you just did! Go figure.
Bravo. Again.
Re offend.
How can expressing what's on the mind, in any way, be offensive? We got a lot to say, but we fear responses of others. We fret so over what another may think, when they are doin the exact same thing....!
Wicked twist of Fate, always havin a swell bout of laughter...at our expense.
Just chill and write your stuff.
Ain't worth the worry, man.
Platform is here, and ain't it just a GRAND platform, hey?
Just like open-mic....but with a touch of anonymity, not animosity.
How's that for encouraging, hey?
I can see you swing the bright side now....
Don't get blinded. :-D
Kidding, ok!
Keep twirling them digits, dip more into your mind and make a SPLASH, what u think!
Cheers
Tidespotter
You responded to Q of A:
I keep looking for my good side but never seem to find it, like a dog that keeps trying to catch his tail but never catches it.
Maybe...er...leave that tail...chase someone else's.
Just kidding, ok.
Do wonder why you say you never seem to find bright/good side... Cos...er...you just did! Go figure.
Bravo. Again.
Re offend.
How can expressing what's on the mind, in any way, be offensive? We got a lot to say, but we fear responses of others. We fret so over what another may think, when they are doin the exact same thing....!
Wicked twist of Fate, always havin a swell bout of laughter...at our expense.
Just chill and write your stuff.
Ain't worth the worry, man.
Platform is here, and ain't it just a GRAND platform, hey?
Just like open-mic....but with a touch of anonymity, not animosity.
How's that for encouraging, hey?
I can see you swing the bright side now....
Don't get blinded. :-D
Kidding, ok!
Keep twirling them digits, dip more into your mind and make a SPLASH, what u think!
Cheers
Tidespotter
Anonymous
8th Jan 2013 8:08pm
Only a pleasure, man!
Now get dipping into that mind and let loose what waits in fury.....
:-)
Tidespotter
Now get dipping into that mind and let loose what waits in fury.....
:-)
Tidespotter
8th Jan 2013 5:16am
some rhymes seemed a little forced but overall it was pretty fantastic very relatable with some beautifully unusual words
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