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Insane
Whoosh thud! Whoosh Thud
Rivers of blood, red blood
On the banks of the in-Siene
Again and again
Instantly causing and ending pain
More! More they roar
The unholy mob
As madam guillotine does her job
Rivers of blood, red blood
On the banks of the in-Siene
Again and again
Instantly causing and ending pain
More! More they roar
The unholy mob
As madam guillotine does her job
Published 29th Dec 2012
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29th Dec 2012 2:16pm
29th Dec 2012 2:45pm
Kinda makes you feel like singing the old Beatles tune about wanting a revolution? Would put it in another light, I suspect. Probably just me.
Very well done with this Blocat.
Very well done with this Blocat.
29th Dec 2012 5:02pm
Thank you folks I woke up with this in my head today it wouldn't go away. Go figure!
30th Dec 2012 6:36pm
10th Jan 2013 12:27pm
Thanks Mary Ann I tried to make it short and sharp just like the instrument itself! ;-))
