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Take
Right here and now
Forever bound
Slide inside
I'll open wide
Ravage every inch you see
Fuck me good
Fuck me free
Go ahead already
Take me
Forever bound
Slide inside
I'll open wide
Ravage every inch you see
Fuck me good
Fuck me free
Go ahead already
Take me
Published 27th Dec 2012
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Anonymous
27th Dec 2012 9:38am
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27th Dec 2012 4:02pm
Rides are better when they're wild!
Thanks for reading and for kind comments always:)
Thanks for reading and for kind comments always:)
27th Dec 2012 10:23am
That is so intense, and you use very little
words to get the little hairs on the back of my neck to stand. Well done.
Blake
words to get the little hairs on the back of my neck to stand. Well done.
Blake
27th Dec 2012 4:05pm
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27th Dec 2012 10:46am
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27th Dec 2012 4:48pm
Anonymous
27th Dec 2012 3:25pm
I'm loving these short sexy poems they get to the point quickly!
27th Dec 2012 4:51pm
All quickies should give you what you need in a short time! Lol thank you
Anonymous
27th Dec 2012 4:25pm
Enjoyable quick read. But if I may offer one thing...omit "why don't you" from the last line and add "and" so it reads "go ahead and take me". As it is now, the whole poem is a direct assault of will and desire but the poem ends with a question. If that was your intent, then I appologize. But in my opinion theme and effect would be better preserved if the last line was a statement. Nicely done!
27th Dec 2012 5:04pm
Well I wanted to show some impatience. Lol but there I hope I cleared it up! Thanks for reading :)
27th Dec 2012 10:16pm
A HIGHLY sexual writer aren't ya .... SB .... ???
However, not cliched, just to the point & very well worded ....
Nice.
Oh & ofcourse ... very Takeable, in this instance !!!!!
However, not cliched, just to the point & very well worded ....
Nice.
Oh & ofcourse ... very Takeable, in this instance !!!!!
28th Dec 2012 1:03am
Better "highly sexual" than not ;) lol
Thanks for the positive comment!
Thanks for the positive comment!
27th Dec 2012 10:55pm
Gotta love a woman that can skip the bull shit and get right to the point. Sexy poem. The guy it was intended for is a lucky man.
28th Dec 2012 1:05am
Well you know I have a pretty good imagination;)
Thank you for the sweet comment.
Thank you for the sweet comment.
28th Dec 2012 8:58pm
Hmmmm ....
I guess so ... ?
Re: Your "better to BE ... than not to be" ..... as it were
In fact, yup, I agree ... Wholeheartedly !!!!!
Have to agree with DHITMAN, whoever is inspiring this stuff in ya is indeed ... The Lucky One !!!!!
I guess so ... ?
Re: Your "better to BE ... than not to be" ..... as it were
In fact, yup, I agree ... Wholeheartedly !!!!!
Have to agree with DHITMAN, whoever is inspiring this stuff in ya is indeed ... The Lucky One !!!!!
28th Dec 2012 9:08pm
16th Feb 2015 11:32am
Right here and now ... That's a challenge I've heeded at a cemetery - on a plane - in a cab - a parking lot - in front of a church at night ...
Cool piece
Cool piece
