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Kick Thoughts
The origin of things
from which it all stemmed
a victim, the curse of destiny
the eventual fate
otherworldly expectations become part of me
looking to the sky for answers to life's questions
waiting in silence for some sort of sign
biting my lip in anticipation of the imminent nothing
transcendental thoughts, mystical and mathematical
everything adding up to zero with a remainder of none
ghostly images of something I cannot recall
is inside of me, pushing me towards mental salvation
sin and consequence are burned into my hands
the divine decree, it is written.....
I follow my course although I want another
but we have predetermined fates, what point is there in wanting
I find myself inquiring about things no one can possibly remedy
I'm sure I'd have better luck bobbing for apples in the ocean
kicking thoughts around in my brain has proved dangerous
my psyche is getting paranoid of my abstract thinking
sense, nothing makes sense if you ponder it long enough
beautiful can become ugly, they are one in the same
my mind is a train wreck of thoughts colliding
never derailing, gaining velocity in my metal atrocity
from which it all stemmed
a victim, the curse of destiny
the eventual fate
otherworldly expectations become part of me
looking to the sky for answers to life's questions
waiting in silence for some sort of sign
biting my lip in anticipation of the imminent nothing
transcendental thoughts, mystical and mathematical
everything adding up to zero with a remainder of none
ghostly images of something I cannot recall
is inside of me, pushing me towards mental salvation
sin and consequence are burned into my hands
the divine decree, it is written.....
I follow my course although I want another
but we have predetermined fates, what point is there in wanting
I find myself inquiring about things no one can possibly remedy
I'm sure I'd have better luck bobbing for apples in the ocean
kicking thoughts around in my brain has proved dangerous
my psyche is getting paranoid of my abstract thinking
sense, nothing makes sense if you ponder it long enough
beautiful can become ugly, they are one in the same
my mind is a train wreck of thoughts colliding
never derailing, gaining velocity in my metal atrocity
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26th Dec 2012 4:55pm
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Re: Kick Thoughts
26th Dec 2012 8:27pm
o, you dear little
velocity atrocity...
nice rite right write
(none left over)
peacelove//
velocity atrocity...
nice rite right write
(none left over)
peacelove//
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26th Dec 2012 9:57pm
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27th Dec 2012 3:09am
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Re: Kick Thoughts
27th Dec 2012 9:53am
"otherworldly expectations become part of me
looking to the sky for answers to life's questions
waiting in silence for some sort of sign
biting my lip in anticipation of the imminent nothing"
thoughts twisting, flaring and shining - like the aurora borealis, of which I was reminded by the image, too.
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looking to the sky for answers to life's questions
waiting in silence for some sort of sign
biting my lip in anticipation of the imminent nothing"
thoughts twisting, flaring and shining - like the aurora borealis, of which I was reminded by the image, too.
Like!
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27th Dec 2012 3:25pm
Re: Kick Thoughts
27th Dec 2012 11:46am
I Absolutely LOVED Reading This! You Are A Great Thinker, And With These Words Have Turned Me Into One, Even If Only For A Moment lol. You Are An Amazing Poet nikkimoe!
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27th Dec 2012 3:26pm
Re: Kick Thoughts
Anonymous
27th Dec 2012 4:58pm
This is awesome, and well received! Over thinking gets us nowhere. Trust yourself, trust your gut, and relinquish all thought. Then the answer will come to you. I liked this piece a lot! Well done!
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