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love (spanish)
el amor es una farsa
es solo atraccion no
necesitas de nada su
afeccion, a menos de que
el te comprenda y te ame
por lo que eres.
es solo atraccion no
necesitas de nada su
afeccion, a menos de que
el te comprenda y te ame
por lo que eres.
Published 24th Dec 2012
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24th Dec 2012 9:58am
Isn't 'love' an undefinable esoteric thought that we conveniently use to define attraction? It has such a wide range of meanings that we cannot quantify that unless we mark it out of 100 then it can be anything. Love of a dog...love of fish, wind, country...man...woman...
25th Dec 2012 4:33am
27th Dec 2012 1:10am
I agree with that...I was trying to say that the Poem's message was unrealistically simplistic, but didn't want to be blunt about a good write.
30th Dec 2012 9:21pm
