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Blood
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Blood
Blood
Red,Soft
Dripping,Spilling,Bleeding
Hurt,Pain,Joy,Emo
Vampires
Written by
darkfate21
(xNightAngelx)
Published
23rd Dec 2012
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Re: Blood
QuantumUnion
(Anon 456)
24th Dec 2012 00:00am
So Emo vampires drink the hard stuff?
Whilst emotional vampires suck your spirit.
Thinks! I prefer the former.
The poem is almost a 'Haiku' the way that you juxtapose ideas.
'Red soft' verses 'Hurt Pain'. Keep up the good work.
Thinks again...is my G. Daughter going to be writing like this in 3 years lol
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Re: Blood
darkfate21
(xNightAngelx)
30th Dec 2012 7:41am
Thx I'll work on it
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Re: Blood
XxDeathWishxX
(Avenging Angel)
28th Apr 2013 6:16am
Interesting ideas, I got the point of it
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re: Re: Blood
darkfate21
(xNightAngelx)
28th Apr 2013 5:20pm
Thanks :)
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Re: Blood
Anonymous
6th Jul 2013 4:57pm
This seems like a random assortment of ideas contextly placed. You could do so much with this idea however, but in my humble opinion, lose the emo thing, unless you know how to work it!
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