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A New Beginning
The end of an era
Another day completed
A sunset on a red horizon
Leading into darkness
Every day leads into darkness
Until the dawn comes along
Unknown shadows
Lurk around every corner
Until enlightenment scares them away
When each new day is born
Another day completed
A sunset on a red horizon
Leading into darkness
Every day leads into darkness
Until the dawn comes along
Unknown shadows
Lurk around every corner
Until enlightenment scares them away
When each new day is born
Published 21st Dec 2012
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22nd Dec 2012 12:37pm
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23rd Dec 2012 8:29pm
Every day leads into darkness
Until the dawn comes along
Unknown shadows
Lurk around every corner
I liked this, it felt strangely motivating, not sure why.
Very well written Mr.Poetryman, keep going.
Until the dawn comes along
Unknown shadows
Lurk around every corner
I liked this, it felt strangely motivating, not sure why.
Very well written Mr.Poetryman, keep going.
24th Dec 2012 2:16am
On another website I post on, I categorized this as an inspirational poem. Perhaps you just relate to the feelings that inspired it. Thanks for commenting Scribbler! JJ
Anonymous
28th Dec 2012 7:48am
Really like this poem the way you ended it was perfect, enjoyed Poetryman!
28th Dec 2012 6:10pm
3rd Jan 2013 4:10am
Ahhh, JJ, I absolutely love this piece that you have crafted from your awe inspiring mind. It is lovely, inspiring, and it sums up quite nicely. I really enjoyed it.
Darkness always evaneses into a shining new day. Truly, a new beginning will arise!
Darkness always evaneses into a shining new day. Truly, a new beginning will arise!
3rd Jan 2013 5:38am
Jess, You always make me smile with your compliments. Thanks for commenting and filling my ego with sugar and spice and everything nice!
JJ
JJ
13th Jan 2013 8:36pm
14th Jan 2013 1:18am
28th Jan 2013 10:39pm
Beautifully written. With each new day is born it most definitely brings about something different. Great write.
29th Jan 2013 1:44am
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