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Death of Him
In the beginning, loved flow like a down stream river
Making love was like standing in the cold, making her shiver
Clouds of warm feelings shrouded them
Cloaked them from the rest of the world
Just as the rain drops fall, he fell for her
Pouring love from his soul to be pure
Until one day his soul felt restless
Then she spoke the words leaving him breathless
She took the breath from him
She was the death of him
Making love was like standing in the cold, making her shiver
Clouds of warm feelings shrouded them
Cloaked them from the rest of the world
Just as the rain drops fall, he fell for her
Pouring love from his soul to be pure
Until one day his soul felt restless
Then she spoke the words leaving him breathless
She took the breath from him
She was the death of him
Published 20th Dec 2012
| Edited 23rd Dec 2012
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20th Dec 2012 3:27am
23rd Dec 2012 6:41am
24th Dec 2012 1:47am
This is different coming from you. The picture captures beautifully your words.
Hope you are well. It's been awhile.
Hope you are well. It's been awhile.
24th Dec 2012 2:34am
Anonymous
25th Dec 2012 5:29pm
Well done!
24th Aug 2014 3:15am
