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Liar
Your words never impressed
they fell off your tongue like cancer
and so did mine
it was fun to play along
planting seeds
having no intentions of watering them
you succeeded
in bewitching some fools
who actually believed in you
I laugh at their pain
how stupid of you
to fall for a drifter
when you should have cherished
what you have at home
forget about your fantasies and fallacies
there is no perfect
and trust me
the plants always die
on the other side of the fence
sweet heart
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Re: A liar
16th Dec 2012 5:19am
Ouchie.. I love it. wouldn't want this side of the sting girl.. lol. damnnnnnn.. =)
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re: Re: A liar
16th Dec 2012 5:23am
Lol thank you. The old saying sits you can't play a player lol. I'm being dead serious to. You really can't especially one with trust issues.
Re: A liar
16th Dec 2012 5:26am
re: Re: A liar
16th Dec 2012 5:28am
Haha that's funny. Kick me some game I'll kick it right back at you. Xoxo Ty I think
Re: A liar
Gigi,
floats like a butterfly,stings like a bee.
Liar
Your words never impressed
they fell of your tongue like cancer
and so did mine
it was fun to play along
planting seeds
having no intentions of watering them
you succeeded
in bewitching some fools
who actually believed in you
I laugh at their pain
how stupid of you
to fall for a drifter
when you should have cherished
what you have at home
forget about your fantasies and fallacies
there is no perfect
and trust me
the plants always die
on the other side of the fence
sweet heart
few suggestions for you ton mull over when you're playing around with it.
much enjoyed, fair play
floats like a butterfly,stings like a bee.
Liar
Your words never impressed
they fell of your tongue like cancer
and so did mine
it was fun to play along
planting seeds
having no intentions of watering them
you succeeded
in bewitching some fools
who actually believed in you
I laugh at their pain
how stupid of you
to fall for a drifter
when you should have cherished
what you have at home
forget about your fantasies and fallacies
there is no perfect
and trust me
the plants always die
on the other side of the fence
sweet heart
few suggestions for you ton mull over when you're playing around with it.
much enjoyed, fair play
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re: Re: A liar
16th Dec 2012 5:40am
Thank you I like the way you have it set up. Reads better. I appreciate it xoxox much respect to you as always
Re: Liar
16th Dec 2012 5:48am
Gg my love you are so deserving of better..let him pluck weeds from others gardens while you sip the nectar of the freshest flower..peace Crim
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16th Dec 2012 10:34am
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16th Dec 2012 2:55pm
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16th Dec 2012 8:50pm
Anytime Gigi, I'm loving some of the stuff you've written while I was gone. :)
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16th Dec 2012 11:00pm
Re: Liar
17th Dec 2012 6:01pm
Love the spunk and straightforward honesty you share.
Liars lie and rarely change.
as for better days.... let it snow!!!
Liars lie and rarely change.
as for better days.... let it snow!!!
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17th Dec 2012 7:16pm
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